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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 4:22 pm Title: March 15 (Part Two)

Loved the writing of the notes.  Your mind must be going a million miles a minute with the details of this plot. FANTASTIC !!!!!!!!



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Hopefully with all the details, I won't drop threads...this is when things start getting complicated since we're getting closer to the asshole that is doing this. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 4:11 pm Title: March 15 (Part One)

Oh dear, someone spiked Brian's drink.  And Blaine has a tie to Emmett.  The mystery just keeps coming.



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Things are about to get complicated indeed. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 4:05 pm Title: March 15 (Part One)

So we know it isn't Ian.  My guess is Chris Hobbs ????  But you will reveal who and when at the right time.  Terrific chapter.  Glad to see you must be feeling better.  Stay well.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know people were expecting it to be, but for me Ethan never registered as important enough on my radar. I always beleived that Justin was in love with the idea of him, and Ethan was far too narcissistic to be the stalker. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 1:17 pm Title: March 15 (Part One)

I hope the drink doesn't contain drugs or poison, but I'm like Brian and it's really weird.

The part with Ian was kind of funny, while uncomfortable: if Brian recognized him that would mean he is not the stalker, right?



Author's Response:

It defintiely seemed off and we'll have to wait and see what the tests show. And now that I have that part written, I can finally answer the question everyone wanted to know. Yes, that means the stalker isn't Ethan. While I despised the arc and Ethan in general, he always struck me as far too narcissistic to be the stalker. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 5:49 pm Title: March 14

So sorry you had to suffer through a migraine. I've gotten them way too often over the last 30+ years and know how horribly debilitating they can be. Don't worry.....post when you can. 

I haven't posted a review in while....so I hope you don't mind if this one is a bit "wordy" lol.

Stalker and the stand in hustler = oh my I was on pins and needles while reading that chapter....never knew if CSD (crazy stalker dude) was gonna go all snapped on the nosy Justin stand-in. The not so bright version of our "Sunshine" was lucky.....if CSD would have had a blackout moment..anything could have happened. 

Brian spotting the Justin lookalike was good and bad...good because it's only a matter of time before they find him....bad because his running away and hiding slows down the investigation. 

The following chapters after CSD's twisted one night stand that focus on B&J daily lives are amazing moments of fluffy smoochy goodness. Sweetness hardly describes their interactions. They adore each other. 

Deb trying to force Brian to forgive Michael's assholeness....is so fucking nervy....I can't with her right now. Hope Brian tells that POS that nothing has changed...and it ain't gonna too. He's outta B&J lives and if Deb keeps pushing she'll be right there with Michael. Outside looking in. 

And finally.....Justin does have something to tell Brian..(giving in to Deb abt inviting Mikey..but Brian has something he needs to confess also....remember the blond hustler Justin stand-in? 😀 Can't wait for the next chapter. I haven't told you lately....this story is amazing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hate having them and you have my sympathies as they are absolutely the worst thing to deal with.

I was a bit worried that CSD, (I love that, I'll have to use it from now on), was going to harm him too. Although, there is more going on there than meets the eye. And yes, those black outs worry me. And our clueless hustler may not be as clueles as we think. His running away does bring up a lot of questions as to his motives.

I live for the moments that Justin and Brian are being sweet, or goofy and are just enjoying each other. :) especially as things heat up with CSD. And ugh, I hadn't even planned for Deb to do that, but then it happened and I was so pissed at her for putting Justin in that position. Brian needs to give her a firm talking to.

And yes, Brian really isn't doing him any favors holding that back. Hopefully, he'll get his head together and tell Justin before it's too late.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 12:33 pm Title: March 14

Lucile is a very funny person!

Justin shouldn't have said anything to Brian about tomorrow: it's the best way to change his mood. He should stop trying to please Debbie knowing it will impact many people. He is too "weak" with her.



Author's Response:

I have so much writing Lucille; I never know what she's going to say next. And Justin should have waited, but in his defense, he had been running around all day; so, he was tired and irritated and likely figured that he would end up falling asleep before he could tell Brian about Michael. He wasn't really thinking. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:49 am Title: March 14

I love Leo and Lucille!  I always thought they would make a good couple for them to hang out with outside of their normal group.

Thanks for the great update.



Author's Response:

Those two have been absolute fun to write; especially Lucille. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:43 am Title: March 13

No apologies necessary.  I've suffered with chronic migraines for over 25 years now.  They are absolutely dibilitating. 

Thanks for the update.  I enjoyed learning a bit more about our stalker.

Hope you are feeling better.



Author's Response:

Migraines do suck. Mine usually don't last more than 24 hours, but this time, I've been a bit stressed with real life and it just seemed to linger. And our stalker is getting bolder. Hopefully Justin pays better attention in the future. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:42 am Title: March 14

I would think that Michael should be the least of there worries, but they don't know the stalker was so close.  Maybe Lucille can keep a close eye out for Justin and intervine when necessary?



Author's Response:

Michael really isn't all that important to them at the moment, but Justin also didn't want Brian to be blindsided when he got to the show and Michael showed up. That would have made him angry. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:36 am Title: March 14

Good chapter.  Love Justin's food choices.  You have a wonderful imagination and it makes your writing sparkle.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) I was trying to be a bit creative, without making Brian too sick in this chapter. LOL! I think he's had enough of Justin's innovative food choices. :) Thanks for reading! :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:31 am Title: March 13

Oh dear, the stalker was too close and Justin didn't realize it.  Sorry about your migraine, there is not much one can do when they happen.



Author's Response:

Migraines can be very debilitating. Hopefully I won't have todeal with another for a while, but who knows. And wow, hasn't the stalker gotten bold; Justin really needs to proceed with more caution. even if he's in a place where he feels safe. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 11:26 am Title: March 13

WOW,  this was great.  What a nut case you have created.  Sorry to hear of the migraine.  I suffered them for years so I fully understand.  Haven't had one in about 10 years but I still fear getting them again.  Hope you feel much better.



Author's Response:

The stalker definitely has more issues than Marvel and DC comics combined. (Sorry, couldn't resist that even if I despise Michael). And thanks. I really hate when I get them, and hope that you never have to suffer through one again.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 10:54 am Title: March 13

The nutso is back in the light, sort of. It seems he had physical contact with Justin, so I would remove Chris from the list of suspects as it's not the hands that were in contact the only time they touched.

The most obvious now is Ethan as we know that they lived together. As for Simon, the only explanation is that something might have happened in NY, which itself is disturbing and it would be something that Brian and Justin could hold on to Lindsay, because she was the starting point of NY.

The stalker seems to have needed to be the center of the attention, I don't see Simon like that. This makes me think to someone else that could fit: Connor James: he had physical contact with Justin, he was famous and Justin left him to go back to Brian.

Therefore: 1st=Ethan, 2nd=Connor, 3=Simon.

Do you keep your readers' suggestions to see who guessed right?



Author's Response:

Well, since we ruled out Ethan recently...I suppose we'll have to wait and see how the others pan out. :) But do keep this in mind: a stalker doesn't need to be a lover or even have a lot of physical contact with the subject to fixate. It could be nothing more than a smile, or a brush of hands on the street or say...when you are greeting people at an art exhibit. The same could be said of conversations. Our stalker never said that he had explicit contact with Justin, just that he had what he considered to be intimate contact. Intimacy comes on many levels. Now, I didn't say that to talk you out of your choices; I just did it to play the devil's advocate and give you a different perspective on things. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 10:07 am Title: March 14

Nice chapter until the "talk" came up. 



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Yeah, Mikey spoils everything. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 9:47 am Title: March 13

Chills.

Something is going to snap inside stalker. I hope Brian has someone watching his back.



Author's Response:

The stalker is definitely, either on the verge of losing it, or is already in the throes of it. I suppose we'll have to see where he goes from here. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 8:21 am Title: March 14

Cute chapter, except for the Michael part...hate him always have

Author's Response:

Yeah, I despise Michael. If I had it my way, I would just write him out of the story. But sadly, he just never goes away when you want him to. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2018 8:08 am Title: March 13

Wish someone would find this creep so I can relax forget the boys ! Please don't worry about posting and don't make yourself sick over it. We can wait....I do get excited when you do update, but please take care of your health

Author's Response:

me too. But keep in mind, the stalker has only been known to them for a little over a month, and this person has been hiding in plain sight for years. he has had the time to build a life where he could observe Justin and not be noticed. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2018 10:35 pm Title: March 12

Justin and his Twinkies

Author's Response:

He really does love those things; it will be funny if he can never look at one again after this... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 5:56 pm Title: March 12

Why didn't they watch a male birth video?



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There is a reason for everything, even if it doesn't seem like it at the time... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 4:03 pm Title: March 12

Hilarious! I bet Brian would have made fun of that kind of videos. He will laugh less when he will have to find a watch to time the contractions.



Author's Response:

I laughed all the way through this vignette because Brian's reaction was just too funny. :) But I bet he won't be paughing the day of, so he probably should have paid more attention... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 3:05 pm Title: March 12

Oh g-d you got Brian's snark perfectly. Couldn't stop laughing. Justin certainly deserved his Twinkies.

Having Jennifer in the birthing room? The birth of a grandchild? I don't think she'll be calm enough to rein Brian in.

Great chapter.👍👍👍



Author's Response:

I almost feel bad for making fun of the videao, but one I started watching them 'through Brian's eyes' I just couldn't take them seriously at all. And you have a point about Jen; Justin wasn't serious about it anyways. He ws mainly doing it to shut Brian up. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 2:27 pm Title: March 12

Lots of info that they really didn't need to know.  At least Justin got his faux twinkie.



Author's Response:

It was pretty basic, and didn't really pertain to them given that they are scheduled for a c-section. Luckily this is just the intro; we still have six more classes to go... Poor Brian. I wonder how he'd react to watching a video of a live birth... Hmmmm. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2018 10:44 am Title: March 12

That was so funny.  You definitely nailed Brian's point of view. 

 



Author's Response:

I had far too much fun with this vignette. :) Brian cracked me up the entire time I was writing and I was literally in tears laughing at his antics. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 6:07 pm Title: March 11

Why do I feel that Simon could be the stalker? What happened in NY when Justin arrived from Pittsburgh? It's not only the article and the fact that Lindsey quite forced him to go. There might be something else.



Author's Response:

Simon is defintiely a shady character; but does he have anything to do with the stalking? Well, we'll have to wait and see. :) But he;s defintiely someone that needs to be watched in my opinion. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 1:34 pm Title: March 11

Paybacks a bitch.



Author's Response:

Bet Justin is wishing he hadn't brought this prank war on... :) Thanks for reading!

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