Date: Jul 22, 2018 7:11 am Title: April 5 (Part One)
I wonder what the surprise is.
I loved Brian talking to Sunbeam.
Date: Jul 19, 2018 6:07 pm Title: April 5 (Part One)
Cuteness and sweetness overload! Not that Brian will agree on ever!
Thank you for the update while you're in pain.
Date: Jul 19, 2018 4:38 pm Title: April 5 (Part One)
So lovey dovey. They need this time before Sunbeam comes and all the other shit hits the fan.
Sweet chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2018 4:35 pm Title: April 5 (Part One)
Hi
How could Michael and Lindsay think they ever had any power to destroy the love Brian and Justin have for each other?
The Stalker will learn just like the other two that Brian and Justin are stronger than them and that Their Love Transcends Everything, including deluded obsessions.
Love Brian having special time with Sunbeam it is such a Brian thing to do :)
Brian and Justin getting away from everyone even temporarily is good they need time to themselves to re-strengthen their bonds and to get away from the meddling of some.
Thanks for the update and you take care cause back pain sucks and as a fellow sufferer I know how draining it can be when you want to be up and out ;)
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2018 11:47 am Title: April 5 (Part One)
How sweet of Brian to talk to his little Sunbeam. Now we have to wait to find out where they are going.
Date: Jul 19, 2018 10:10 am Title: April 5 (Part One)
Fantastic chapter. Love a loving and sincere Brian. Definitely a tissue box chapter. Sorry to hear about your back. I deal with back issues everyday, some days worse than others. And, unless people experience back pain, they just don't realize what it feel like. Feel better and take it easy. Will wait patiently for the next chapter. A short chapter is better than none at all.
Date: Jul 17, 2018 8:17 pm Title: April 4 (Part Two)
So happy to find a new chapter! Thank you for the update!
Finally they are off and far away. I loved how Cynthia and Yasmeen managed Brian.
Date: Jul 17, 2018 1:15 am Title: April (Part One)
I say Chris Hobbs has lost his mind.
Date: Jul 16, 2018 2:32 pm Title: April 4 (Part Two)
Welcome back. So sorry to hear that you had problems. Always something isn't it? Great update, so worth waiting for and still as powerful as usual. Twice a week sounds great. Will look forward to each new chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2018 1:15 pm Title: April 4 (Part Two)
Michael is going to be pissed when he finds out that Brian has escaped his visit. Nice touch. Love that Daphne and Liam are there NY safe place. I've been racking my brain and can only come up with Eric for our mystery man, but he seems way too young. Glad to see you back.
Date: Jul 03, 2018 9:01 pm Title: April (Part One)
I hope writing this chapter didn't put you off cos you haven't posted for a while. Hope there's more to come soon cos it's really good writing and I love it and miss the updates!
Thanks
Deb
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2018 3:52 am Title: January 1
I really miss you and your updates to this great story. Hope all is well and will continue with this story. 😊
Date: Jun 22, 2018 7:36 pm Title: April (Part One)
Hi. I really hope that you are fine and will return soon. It is great story...
Date: Jun 21, 2018 7:15 am Title: April (Part One)
Hi Ashita, I hope RL is treating you right and that you are well. I am looking forward to an update soon.
Date: Jun 06, 2018 9:19 pm Title: April (Part One)
Seriously, Chris Fucking Hobbs!!!!!! Update soon
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2018 1:58 am Title: April (Part One)
Totally creepy from beginning to end!!!
This stalker is someone who knew or thinks he knew Justin while he was with Brian?
Whatever he left behind I hope it will be found soon and has his finger prints all over.
Lindsay deserves to be locked in a cell with The Stalker, Michael, Craswell, his friends and Nancy for all of time.
If not that then she deserves to have her Ass kicked until the dinosaurs resume life back on earth.
Lindsay is in so much trouble that even Momsy and Daddums can save her, they won't want to ruin what little respect they still have left.
I wonder was anyone outside watching the area and Justin?
They gotta catch this creep cause he is unhinged and is willing to kill Brian and Justin's baby to have Justin.
More security is definitely called for around Britin, Brian and Justin that slime is way too close now!! <shivers>
Thanks for giving my nightmares, nightmares lol ;)
Date: Jun 02, 2018 5:07 pm Title: April (Part One)
Oh, wow, no wonder you struggled with this chapter. The stalker's mind is so warped. You did a fantastic job of portraying that.
Date: Jun 02, 2018 2:10 pm Title: April (Part One)
Scary! This guy is out of his mind, completely mad. He is much too close from Justin and has a secured get-away; but he made a big mistake (one more) and maybe somebody will report him. Maybe Mary will remember him.
Date: Jun 02, 2018 2:06 pm Title: April (Part One)
So Lindsay was working with him...I'm still trying to figure out who this person is. You have me stumped.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2018 1:02 pm Title: April (Part One)
OMG! The guy is really psycho! How will he be stopped.
Date: Jun 02, 2018 12:45 pm Title: April (Part One)
Wow he is one scary dude and Brian and Justin are in real danger this guy is a psychopath. Good job writing such a difficult chapter
Date: May 29, 2018 2:55 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Damn! #Truth!
This is the reason I love anti-Michael/Lindsay stories...love to see them get their comeuppance! I could devour chapter upon chapter of the stuff! You go girlfriend!
Date: May 27, 2018 11:42 pm Title: March 7
The hustler's name on the show was actually Blake (strange enough since Ted's Blake had already been introduced in the first season), but as has been stated many times...Cowlip never really let little details get in the way! Lol!
Really no biggie and has no bearing at all on your story; just one of those little quirky things that stuck in my noggin. 😄
Date: May 27, 2018 5:17 pm Title: February 14
I don't usually submit reviews unless I'm particularly thrilled with a story and I don't ever read WIPs unless I'm guaranteed consistent and frequent updates. That being said, I am thoroughly enjoying this story and love all the Mikey/Lindsay smack downs...can't stand those two varmints!
Keep up the good work!!!
Date: May 25, 2018 9:33 pm Title: April 3 (Part Two)
Wow! Holy shit!
Poor Justin. I know he is so frazzled and scared out of his mind right now. He doesn't feel safe anywhere.
I'm glad they are leaving town for a bit. They need to get away. I hope they can catch this person soon. Otherwise, he may go into early labor. Too much stress isn't good for the baby.
Thanks for the amazing update.