Date: Apr 01, 2018 8:50 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
I really meant to comment on the last chapter.....PERFECTION!!! In this chapter I can understand Brian’s anger and hurt. Justin really did make it seem as if he didn’t trust him enough to tell him about Simon’s true intentions....Lindsay’s as well. Justin shouldn’t have kept it from him no matter how well intentioned.
can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Giving Lindsay the bitch slap she so ricly deserved was fun! :) And yeah, Brian is really hurt by Justin's seeming lack of faith; I can understand Justin wanting spare Brian the pain of his so-called friends bratty behavior, but in this case, Brian really needed to be in on it. This wasn't some small transgression, easily overlooked, it will have serious reprecussions. Of course, Brian doesn't have a completely clear conscience himself; he too has been holding off on telling Justin something important, and that is likely to bit him on the ass later. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 8:01 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Sooooo good. Bu please don’t let Brian be too hard on Justin!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm sure things will work out between Brian and his Sunshine, but it might get a little bumpy. Just hang in there... Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 6:56 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
You gave me my wish. How sweet. Can I have a million dollars now? Haha
Author's Response:
Oh, if I only had a million dollars to give... Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 6:52 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Yeah, the banshee is out, for good I hope. Justin will have some explaining to do and that will be a bumpy moment. Brian is hurt and it will take him lots of energy not to scream his pain.
Author's Response:
She is defintiely on her way out, that's for sure; there is no way to talk her way out of this one. :) And Brian and Justin will definitely have some rocky issues to work out; hopefully that can get done without too much blood being drawn. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 6:18 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
OMFG! That was handled beautifully.
She was caught in the act. It's on film. Did she really think she could sway Brian into believing her innocence? Against his husband? Stupid stupid woman. She has no more marriage. No more Peter. No more sympathy.
Daphne got in what she could, damn Liam, but if she didn't then Lindsay wouldn't have known what hit her. For a good as Justin is at doling out a smackdown, Jennifer is so much better. I mean Justin had to learn from someone right?
Now how Brian handles all he found out from what happened at tje Sap's party to Lindsay's betrayal, to that scum Simon is a whole new kettle of fish.
Brian's angry for Justin not telling him. He's feels that Justin didn't have enough faith in him, in them. He's feeling guilt that Justin went through any of that at allm. But I thinks he's hurt by Ted knowing at least some of what happened and didn't confide in Brian either.
Oh yeah, time to call the cops on the disturbance at their door.
I'm sorry you weren't feeling well. I couldn't wait until this chapter git posted. Was very excited to see it up. Now I just want more.
Author's Response:
Lindsay's sense of entitlement and her absolute delusion that she has Brian firmly under her thumb always astounds me; but wow did she get a wake up call or what? ;) Daphne did get a couple of good licks in; and not to worry, I have a feeling Daphne isn't done with her yet. Liam has to sleep sometime. And Brian is definitely feeling a lot of mixed emotions; hopefully he'll get that all worked out in his head before there is too much damage done. And thanks, I'm feeling much better now and I also now know not to use that brand of soap. I'm glad you're enjoing the story! Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Apr 01, 2018 5:53 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Perfect!!!! Love it that everyone got to see and hear all of it. Please let Brian get past the hurt of Justin not trusting him enough to let him know what happened in the past. Brian needs to see that Justin needed to take care of this on his own and not feel like the victim that Brian needed to take care of and shelter. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm sure that Brian, once he gets over his shock, and past the anger enough to process it, they will resolve things like they usuall do. It might get a little bumpy though, because they are both passionate people and things can get away from them in in the heat of the moment. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 5:03 am Title: March 22 (Part Five)
Wow. When you plan a story you do it up right. Having everyone find out by video cam was downright perfect. I was kinda hoping Lucille would give Lindsay something to remember. If this talk they are going to have doesn't put Justin into labor I don't know what will.
Author's Response:
I'm sure Lucille will still gie Lindsay something to remember; she'll likely just wait until she least expects it. As for the talk, well, we'll see what happens. I have hpoe that Brian will be mindful of Justin's condition and not let things get too out of hand. Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2018 7:27 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Go Justin , just wish Brian had been able to hear it all
You mentioned you were able to finf the fanFiction where Debbie gives Justin a bruise..could you share info here ,if it's in KD
Title and author. If it is in AO3 I will never find it UGH Thanks for all your hard work on this story and I do love it.
Author's Response:
Wish granted! ;) As for the story, I know I answered you on the Facebook page, but I haven't checked it in the last couple of days, so I'll post it here as well. The story was called Why Do I Love You? And it was by starlight; one of his/her older fics, so it's on the second page. :) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2018 6:04 am Title: March 22 (Part Three)
You poor thing, this was a monster but great for us readers. Loved all the pic(must have taken you forever) Armani snow suit How cute can you get. All the gifts were perfect. Justin got his perfect nursery and Brian got the perfect Sunshine cuff links
Author's Response:
Had to have something Armani for brian in all that mix. :) It was a long post, but mostly because Justin and Brian wouldn't stop bantering with each other. Trying to keep them on task was a fight. But at least they had fun and enjoyed all their gifts. :) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2018 5:59 am Title: March 22 (Part Two)
Poor Brian Has to redo everything to make sure he doesn't suffer the wrath of Justin. He probably will anyhow the Twinkies in the favor boxes....brillant
Author's Response:
He does, but he knows it's worth it to make his Sunshine happy; and poor brian and those Twinkies, that's likely to come back and bite him on the ass later on if he doesn't watch it. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 9:13 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
O.............M..................F..................G!
I've always dreamed of a chapter like this. a full page full on smack down.
this was BRILLIANT and loved every word. justin was AMAZING!
Now...wouldn't it be fantastic if Brian was actually listening in on the whole thing!??!
Well done!
cheers
elaine
Author's Response:
Well I am very happy to deliver; on both points actually. ;) Thank you and thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2018 7:23 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Oh I do hope Melanie was lurking nearby and heard all this. That will spell the end for Lindsay. What she isn't aware of is that Blake also knows the truth. Love how Justin let her have it with both barrels.
Author's Response:
Yes, Justin was very careful to say a friend and not mention Blake by name, just in case she tried to wiggle out of it. But, as we all know, she didn't get very far with that, now did she? ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 7:04 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Yes!!!!! A beautiful Lindsay smack down. Love this so much.
Oh baby's first curse word and baby's first hated food
Thanks for the joy
Author's Response:
Justin really handed her ass to her, didn't he? And ohhhh...baby's first curse word; I hadn't even thought of that one! Thanks! And as always, thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 5:32 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
I love this story, it is one of my favorites!! I love the Lyndsey smackdown, please say the camera and recording was still on!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
I'm happy to hear that you're liking it! :) As for the camera....well, I suppose we've seen what happened with that. ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 5:20 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Go Justin!! Lindsay just got burn by a hot ray of Sunshine. Now i only hope the monitor/cam was on and everyone heard the conversation.
Author's Response:
LOL @ burned by a hot ray of Sunshine. I really like that! As for the monitor, well, that conversation wasn't as private as she'd hoped... ;) Thanks for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2018 5:03 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Have been reading for quite sometime and I must say DAMN!!!!!!!!!!
When Justin Slaps A Bitch he really knows how to cut deep with no chance of healing.
Lindsay should've known better than to go toe-to-toe with Justin as a Wasp with years (So Many Years!) on Justin she was always with a amateur with no understanding of how to be a true Wasp.
Now we know the secret Justin and Blake share and why Justin loathes Lindsay (Justin could never Hate the flea bag, cause Hate requires passion and all of Justin's passion is reserved for Brian;)) and now she knows that Justin was never her pawn.
Justin achieved everything her evil little heart desired by sheer determination, faith, love and a backbone made of steel.
What good did laying on her back and being in her knees get Lindsay but a sore back and knees.
I so hope everyone heard and saw that on the monitor?
Why was she taking pictures of the mural?
Does Justin have plans for Simon and his friends?
I always wondered if Lindsay had something to do with Justin's paintings being destroyed?
Wow What A smackdown and it's only the start!!!!!:)
Author's Response:
Justin most definitely has a cutting tongue on him; and there is no bitch more deserving of a flaying. So many questions, and sadly you know what I'm going to say - you'll have to stya tuned for developments. ;) Lindsay really should have known not to take Justin on; he has demonstrated time and time again to be superior to her in every way and he doesn't even have to flaunt it. He just simply is everything she could ever hope to be and will never attain because she is too busy waiting for it to be handed to her rather than going out and making it happen like Justin did. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:22 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Pls, pls, pls, tell me the baby monitor was on or Brian heard all that, so that he can hand her her ass too? This is so good.
Deb
Author's Response:
Well something certainly was on and preserved it for posterity... Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:18 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Sour grapes, but the result is delightful; I love Justin in pit bull mode; he doesn't let anything go and strike every time he can.
Great job: that explains so much why Justin is so mad when Simon's name is in the air.
I hope the video channel is still on and that everybody in the media room heard the exchange.
Author's Response:
Justin did give her a good verbal thrashing. He may have sat on it for a while, but when push comes to shove, he will always fight back. It's sad that Lindsay and Michael always seem to forget that trait in his personality. As for the video...stay tuned. ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 3:17 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
That was harsh. Do it again. Haha
Author's Response:
Well, I do hope you like the next installment then. ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 12:25 pm Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Three words: motione sensor camera))
Author's Response:
Those are some very important, key words to remember. ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 10:57 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Wow! Love when Justin delivers a smackdown. He does it so well.
What was she doing taking pictures of the nursery for? The mural was a lame excuse. Stupid woman.
I did learn one thing though, whomever the stalker is, and Simon seems most likely now because Justin is the one that got away. Whomever it is Lindsay is the link.
I surely hope Brian was out in the hallway listening to all the was being said. You know, he would have been coming to see how his Sunshine was doing and heard voices coming from the room.
Wouldn't want Lindsay to try running to him saying how badly Justin hurt her feelings. Not that Brian would care but you know how she is.
Yay Justin for kicking her out.
Author's Response:
That is an interesting question; why would she be taking pictures... Well, we don't have answers for that yet I suppose. But at least Justin finally got all that bitterness of his chest and, hopeully, Lindsay will think twice about messing with him. And as for Brian listening in, well, he doens't have to be outside the door to learn everything. ;) But yes, Lindsay is exactly the sort to try that, hoping to drive a wedge between them. I doubt she'll succeed. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 10:57 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)
Go Justin!!!! That was a very long time coming. Thanks for that update.
Author's Response:
He definitely let her have it. :) Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 10:47 am Title: March 22 (Part Three)
Wow I love all of their gifts. This chapter was great. Off to read the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I spent a lot of time really thinking the gifts through, so I'm glad they were well received. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 28, 2018 10:44 am Title: March 22 (Part Four)
WOW, this chapter was some of your absolutely best writing. Getting the feelings that Justin was saying across is amazing. Love when Lindsay gets what she deserves, but usually people still keep the gloves on. You took them off and came out swinging. FANTASTIC job. Now you can take on Michael if necessary. And, a good story can't always be sweet. A little spice can go along way. Just wish Brian had been standing outside the door listening to his "Sunshine" give it to her.
Author's Response:
Justin definitely didn't hold back on Lindsay; although, with three years to simmer in the back of his mind, I'm not surprised he went off on her. And Michael; I keep hoping he'll just go away, but he just k eeps shoing up lie a bad penny. As for Brian...well, we all know that he'll hear about it in the end... Thanks for reading! :)
Date: Mar 27, 2018 5:14 pm Title: March 22 (Part Three)
What a party! Great job, once more!
The gifts from Gus were very funny: he is a smart, witty and funny little guy. He does pay attention, like his father, even when you think he doesn't. The one from Ted and Blake is great and will be very handy. I loved the Armani gifts because they were for Brian's pleasure. I also loved the one from Cynthia. The rattle from Jennifer gave a very emotional moment.
Brian had a great idea to have everyone watching the revealing from the media room so Justin will be the first to see the nursery.
Author's Response:
Brian was such a proud Papa in that moment; all his work had paid off! The Kinney is strong in that one! ;)And there had to be one or two Armani gift in there for Brian. That three-in-one thing was amazing. And I had to do the rattle thing. We have something similar in my family, although it isn't a rattle. So, I wanted something like that for Justin and Jen.
The camera was ingenious of Brian, and it solved several problems, like people seeing it before Justin and trying to get everyone into a small space. Thanks for reading! :)