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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2018 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 44 - I Get Along Without You

Great chapter.  Makes me wish time travel really happened.  But Justin's days are getting limited and I am getting nervous.  I just know you are thinking of a happy ending.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2018 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 44 - I Get Along Without You

Justin and the lightbox: he is a quick learner; it's also amazing what he is daring to do to please Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2018 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 43 - I'll Get By

Bitter-sweet chapter: it's great news about Molly, but so sad for Jennifer.

Chris is becoming more and more a risk for Justin; I hope it won't change the future.

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 7:36 am Title: Chapter 43 - I'll Get By

I was so worried when chris cought them. I hope that will be the end of it.

Justin must be overwhelmed with all thw information he got from brian about his mom and family. Why ny feeling told me it wont be easy to get justin move to the future?



Author's Response:

We're glad we caught you by surprise, the boys were shocked he caught them too. Was Brian right to have a go at him like that? Or should he have let Justin handle it?

You never know, they may both end up living in the past or you know, going their separate ways *evil laughter*

As always, thanks for reviewing :)

~TAG & Sally

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 3:47 am Title: Chapter 43 - I'll Get By

I'm not crying at all. Nope, not a tear. It's allergies.

BTW, Khaki wacky is my new favorite saying! 



Author's Response:

We're sorry to hear about your allergies ;) Seriously *hugs you* 

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

~ TAG & Sally

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2018 3:41 am Title: Chapter 43 - I'll Get By

Thank goodness I just got more tissues yesterday. This story is so good and the emotional parts are perfect for the story. You are amazing writers.



Author's Response:

We're glad you stocked up on tissues, we can't promise you won't need them again because you might... but you might not mwahaha.

Thank you SO much, that is such a wonderful compliment. We definitely work well together (I hope I am not speaking on behalf of just myself (Sally) here lol.

We look forward to your reviews so much, so thank you again.

~TAG & Sally

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2018 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 43 - I'll Get By

Wow.  You scared me with Chris finding them.  But you worked it out okay.  Justin finding out he still has relatives is amazing.  Here's hoping that Cynthia comes up with a workable plan.



Author's Response:

We like to keep you on your toes ;)

Isn't it lovely that Justin has been able to see his future and knows that he still has people out there, (including ones he doesn't even know) even if he can't approach them... or can he?

Cynthia is very resourceful, we have a lot of faith in her, we hope you do too.

Thank you again for reviewing.

~TAG & Sally

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2018 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Don't Fence Me In

Brian is using unfair tricks to get Justin to quit 1941, but he has a very good reason for that.

I could only imagine the face of Brian when he saw the swim shorts with giant turtles.



Author's Response:

I think Gus could get Brian to pretty much do anything he wanted, Brian may pretend to be put out, but he'd do anything to make his Sonny Boy happy.  The shorts would have looked awesome on him, obviously. His face would have been priceless though.

Brian is definitely going to use every trick in the book (not those kinds of tricks LOL) to keep his Blue Eyes safe and with him. Wonder what he has planned next?

Thank you for reviewing.

~TAG & Sally

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2018 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Don't Fence Me In

Wow, great chapter.  You are wonderful writers.  Absolutely loved the swim shorts.  So funny.  Laughed at thinking of Brian Kinney wearing something like that.  Now, let's find a way to keep Blue Eyes with Brian & Gus !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful compliment, it means a lot and we really appreciate you taking the time to review.

The swim shorts were amazing and we could only imagine Brian's face when he saw himself in them lol.

~TAG & Sally

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2018 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Don't Fence Me In

I'm sure that Cynthia will come up with the perfect plan, she is a kick-ass assistant after all.  What a wonderful last day Gus had with his daddy and his Jussin.



Author's Response:

Cynthia is THE BOMB, there has to be a reason Brian kept her around for so long :)

Gus is a very lucky boy.

Thank you as always for reviewing.

~ TAG & Sally

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2018 7:28 am Title: Chapter 42 - Don't Fence Me In

Its about time brian came up with the plan to 'save' justin from the death. Im glad cynthia is on board with this. 



Author's Response:

Brian needed someone on his side, and Cynthia is the best choice...we hope ;)

~TAG & Sally

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Sentimental Journey

So relieved the passage wasn't destroyed.

What surprises me is that Brian is going back to 1941 with Cynthia. He should have shown her the passage, gone thru it and gone back to 2016 immediately. What if anything happens while they both are in 1941?

Cynthia is a smart girl, she would have trusted Brian after seeing just the buildings destroyed around the alley.

Reviewer: DavidR Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 3:42 am Title: Chapter 41 - Sentimental Journey

 

    How about this?  

       On July 22nd, no matter how hard Brian pleaded, Justin went on the mission.  He could not let the guys in his squadron down.  True to history, he was shot down, but parachuted to safety somewhere in Northern France where a farmer’s family helped him.  But for the sake of history, it was reported that he was shot down and killed.

   One night, Brian read ahead in history, and saw a report that in September an American RAF Pilot had snuck through German lines in Northern France and was working on a Norwegian Ship on his was back to England.  Brian went back to 1941, hired a mercenary group, got a boat and met the ship.  To keep this short, he rescued Justin, brought him back to 2016 and lived happy every after.

  O, ok, so a little convoluted and too symplistic..  But take this as a compliment to your story.  As Iad said in a previous ‘feedback’, I can leave the computer, but not the story. 

  Congratulations on a sensational story. 

  DavidR  

 

 



Author's Response:

You're getting warmer . . . LOL. But, seriously, thank you for the wonderful compliment of saying that you can't stop thinking about this story - that's the best thing we could ever hear. Now, we're off to write some more. TAG & Sally

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 2:16 am Title: Chapter 41 - Sentimental Journey

It's great that Brian thought to tell Cynthia.



Author's Response:

We're glad you agree, and she seems like the best choice, right?

Thanks for your review :)

TAG & Sally

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 1:39 am Title: Chapter 41 - Sentimental Journey

I'm so  glad that they found the portal and even gladder that Cynthia is in on it.



Author's Response:

Right? Can you imagine if he got stuck in 1941?????? I mean, it could still happen.... ;)

Cynthia seemed like the best person to bring in, she's trustworthy, smart and no one would mess with her.

Thanks as always for reviewing.

TAG & Sally

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2018 1:17 am Title: Chapter 41 - Sentimental Journey

Oh this is getting so good.  I have really been thinking of how you will keep Justin in 2016, but since I have no idea, I can tell you now why you are the writers and I am a reader.  !!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2018 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Sentimental Journey

Im so glad brian can go to the zoo with gus. Cynthia was so brave to follow brian like that.bi hope they wont stuck there. 



Author's Response:

We aren't cruel enough to let Brian never see his Sonny Boy again, are we? Hehehe, hopefully, both he and Cynthia will return to 2016 in one piece.  Keep reading, and thank you for the lovely reviews.

~ TAG & Sally

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 3:33 am Title: Chapter 40 - I'll Never Smile Again

Did NOT see that coming... although maybe part of me had always been worried that the portal itself was somehow temporary, maybe tied to something astrological.

And, Applesauce! I love how, even in the midst of a serious conversation, Justin's 40's vernacular pops up to keep the story in the time frame! ;-)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 40 - I'll Never Smile Again

That is unexpected and so evil! Poor Gus, who will have a huge pain when he won't see his dad.

I thought that one day that might happen, but not while Gus was in London.

I hope Lindsey won't react badly after their talk, if Brian doesn't get back very soon.

 

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 4:19 am Title: Chapter 40 - I'll Never Smile Again

Oh nooooooo...please update soon... i wish they trapped forever in 2016

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 4:12 am Title: Chapter 39 - Darn That Dream

I hate lindsay. She is ungrateful b*tch. Brian gave her a son and unlimited amount of money and she treated his boyfriend like sh*t. Forgive my language. 

 

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 4:03 am Title: Chapter 38 - This Nearly Was Mine.

Oh my heart....

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 3:34 am Title: Chapter 37 - I'm Glad There Is You

It will be getting harder to leave brian and gus is justin decide to return to his time

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 3:00 am Title: Chapter 36 - Let's Get Away From It All.

Little Justin Homemaker LOL.... it suit him well...

i hope justin realize that he is belong with brian and gus. Getting married and give Gus brother or sister instead of going to the war :(

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2018 2:46 am Title: Chapter 35 - Long Ago and Far Away

Its kind of overwhelming for justin. I guess its easier to adapted when you travel to the past then travel to the future

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