Date: Nov 06, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Let’s Pretend.
I was sure Brian would check if his most important body part, after his brain, was still there!
It great how you are building his need to go back to 2016 while thinking if he would go back to find Justin on a date at the bar.
I'm wondering how he will prepare his trip: he would need cash, clothes that could pass from this period, not sure jeans or Tshirts were already available in 1941 as the American troops weren't deployed yet. He could start the trend!
His diet will be a huge problem as the food was more than basic.
Will he try to get Justin thru the portal?
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2017 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 3 - To Each His Own
I don't think Brian is going to make his meeting. What happens when he finds out he's stuck in 1941?
Author's Response:
What makes you think he's stuck in 1941? *wink* TAG
Date: Nov 05, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 3 - To Each His Own
Omg Brian is in for a huge reality check huh? The poor dear, wait til he learns he's time traveled. lol Should be fun!
Date: Nov 05, 2017 9:28 am Title: Chapter 3 - To Each His Own
If Brian's hotel doesn't exist in 1941, where will he go? How will he show Justin that he's coming from 2016?
Date: Nov 05, 2017 8:35 am Title: Chapter 2 - Rusty Dusty Blues.
Great concept: it reminds me of the film "Midnight in Paris" where Owen Wilson was transported to the Paris of the beginning of 20th century and found out his true self after several travels back and forth. Great film by the way.
The cultural shock is so funny: Brian's swearing is not going unnoticed here and the cockney one is quite interesting. I can't wait to see how he will deal with this particular period: WWII and not so open regarding gays.
Author's Response:
I haven’t seen that movie - seems like I need to watch it though. Tonight’s research project? Thanks for the rec. TAG
Date: Nov 05, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 3 - To Each His Own
Oh, I love how you've managed to continue with the "ruse," by convincing Brian he was in the middle of some rave party, LOL! I'm not sure who's going to be more shocked when they learn the truth - Brian or Justin!
Something tells me that maybe Justin was "outed" at home?
Looking forward to the next part!
Date: Nov 03, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue.
Goodie! A new interesting beginning!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks. We hope you like where we're going with this
*SunshineSally
Date: Nov 03, 2017 3:30 am Title: Chapter 2 - Rusty Dusty Blues.
This is great. I love time travel stories so I am hooked already. The cockney is just strange, they use a whole sentence for one word.
Date: Nov 03, 2017 1:26 am Title: Chapter 2 - Rusty Dusty Blues.
I think Brian's going to have to deal with a lot more than just a ruined suit! Curious as to how Justin ended up in the RAF.
Great start!
Date: Nov 03, 2017 1:09 am Title: Chapter 2 - Rusty Dusty Blues.
Totally loving this ladies! It's so different, great plot bunny! Poor Brian, he's so confused. This is very exciting, more please!
Date: Nov 03, 2017 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue.
Ooh! I shiny new historical Fic... with a little touch of science fiction too? I'm in!
Author's Response:
YAY we glad you approve. Who doesn't love new fic????? We're very excited to see what you think and where this is going.
*SunshineSally
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 12:23 am Title: Chapter 2 - Rusty Dusty Blues.
Can't wait to see how Brian takes it when he finds himself in WWII? or is it WWI?
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue.
Wow. Now this is a unique storyline if I ever read one.
Author's Response:
Thank you, we're really excitred by this story.
~TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 02, 2017 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue.
You have to have Ianto Jones too. Have to have a happy Captain.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2017 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue.
So you found a rift in time in London. is it near Canary Wharf? (HEHEHEHE!!!!!)
Great start Ladies!!
Author's Response:
Who knows - maybe Captain Jack will make a cameo in this story? LOL. TAG