Date: Nov 24, 2017 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 14 - God Bless The Child.
I just dropped by to let you know what a terrific story this is. So many questions come to mind that I do not want you to reply to. Let the story tell me. Yet, I just can’t help mentioning a few.
It is nice to think that if things get terrible for Justin, Brian grab him into the present time. But who says that it is not Brian’s DNA that somehow allows him to go into the past. Justin may not be able to pass on to the future. ???
What will Brian do when it is reported that Justin’s plane was shot down. But Justin didn’t die but
parachuted to the country side of some country. What wasn’t reported is that another pilot saw the parachute. However, the landing is behind enemy lines. Now what. Yes, yes, that is sort of another
story.
More currently, I can’t wait to read how Brian explains Gus to Justin. We really could have fun with that.
There is so much more, but that is enough. Oh yes, one more. I can’t help it. In this last chapter, it
was mentioned that Brian misses Gus, and would like Linds and Mel and Gus to fly over to London. In the mist of a war? That sees strange to me. If they did, would Brian take Gus to see Justin.
That is enough. Thanks so much for this great story. I look forward to each chapter.
DavidR
Author's Response:
Hi David,
We're SO happy you're enjoying this, thank you so much for reviewing.
Hopefully, it won't be long before your questions are answered and I really hope you like what we have come up with.
When we mentioned Brian wanting to possibly bring Gus over, that would have been into 2016 London, not war-torn London. I'll go back and check we made that clear - Brian would DEFINITELY not risk Gus's life to bring him into the 40's, no matter how much he'd like to, he just wouldn't do it.
Can't wait to see what you think of the next few chapters :)
~Sally
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 14 - God Bless The Child.
Brian is changing history with his attitude and making people see that there is not so much class difference. I'm thinking Harry is going to be someone important.
Author's Response:
That is exactly what we were going for, and hopefully, Brian has gotten through to some people.
You may be right about Harry... but you also, may be wrong :p
Thank you again for reading and reviewing. We appreciate it.
~Sally
Date: Nov 24, 2017 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 14 - God Bless The Child.
Brian playing Santa is quite sweet: he does know what it feels like to be born on the wrong side of the tracks.
Date: Nov 24, 2017 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 14 - God Bless The Child.
AH, Brian Kinney has a heart. You wrote an amazing chapter that showed this side of Brian, but more importantly, a chapter with no Justin and it was truly a wonderful chapter. Just keep Justin safe in future chapters, gotta have my happy ending!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2017 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Why Don’t You Do Right?
Let's hope that everyone is safe. So many were not.
Author's Response:
It was an awful time, hopefully, Brian kept his promise :)
~Sally
Date: Nov 22, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Why Don’t You Do Right?
It's really amazing that London survived this Blitz. It must have been a huge disappointment for the Gerries.
Author's Response:
We're tough, it's amazing how a city can pull together at a time like that. IN YOUR FACE, GERRIES :)
~Sally
Date: Nov 22, 2017 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Why Don’t You Do Right?
Great chapter & the pics were a nice addition. Have a good day.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, we're glad you're enjoying the story and the added pictures. We want you all to feel as much a part of this as possible.
Thank you again for reviewing.
~Sally
Date: Nov 22, 2017 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Why Don’t You Do Right?
Brian to the rescue! Yay! I love when he plays hero. Awww Brian is getting all attached to Sunshine...what a surprise! Watch out Brian, Daphne is a wild one! Great photos! Gene Tierney was gorgeous!
Author's Response:
Brian definitely loves saving the day, doesn't he? But we agree, hero Brian is very, very hot :)
He is definitely falling for his Blue Eyes, and I think the feelings are reciprocated LOL.
Glad you're enjoying this and thank you so much (as always) for the lovely review.
~Sally
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:46 am Title: Chapter 12 - Lover, Come Back To Me
Love all the stories that you write separately and together. This one is great. I love the era pieces and this one is fascinating. Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, but I forgot my penname and just got it restored. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Happy Thanksgiving.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, we really appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Glad you got your penname sorted, hopefully, that means we'll be hearing from you a lot more?? :)
We hope you had a wonderful holiday.
~Sally and TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2017 4:08 am Title: Chapter 12 - Lover, Come Back To Me
Air Raids are scary. At least I'm hoping there is a happy ending to this great story.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Lover, Come Back To Me
The letters are hilarious! The heating service provider is a great idea to convey their needs and to remain PC in this troubled time.
I think Justin will be injured and Brian will have major difficulties to find out what happened.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Lover, Come Back To Me
Absolutely love their little love letters! Don't tell Brian I called then that! lol
I do think they'll make it through the big raid and I certainly hope that Brian didn't change history but that brings up a question actually....does Justin have family that would miss him if he went into the future with Brian?
Date: Nov 19, 2017 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Lover, Come Back To Me
Oh, I do love a cock-sure <grin> Justin! Put the ultimatum out there for the man who doesn't do ultimatums, I say! LOL
I'm really eager to see how Brian deals with the monster air raid coming, as well as seeing how the others deal with the nonperishables, etc., that he brought from 2016. Granola bars was the first thing that crossed my mind... wrapped in that foil paper with a "use-by" date on them! Oy!
Date: Nov 19, 2017 11:58 am Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.
Oooooo.... Now it gets complicated! The setting of a war is perfect for this kind of plot. Brian can, at least for a while, pass off his knowledge as some kind of secret info from the war spy game. Still, can you image a RAF officer trying to wrap his mind around the fact that he's going out with some kind of spy!!! Oh, the intrigue!
Your mention of the 'ovens' actually shocked me a little. I guess I was getting into the past mindset and wasn't expecting it. Lord... imagine having to explain THAT to someone with no historical knowledge of it! There's no way they're going to believe at first that human beings could be that monstrous. And, god help me, I can't help comparing that to our situation today. (Now, I'm going to go hide under a bed somewhere for a couple of years.)
Date: Nov 18, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.
Good chapter, like all of them! For a moment I thought the phone is working in the past, that would be something. I wonder what Justin might think of Brian - such a gadget must look soooo spy-like! And yet Justin is trustful.
Can't wait for Justin to find out about the time-travel!
Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.
Oh no, the phone is still working as an alarm: too bad!
Justin was already intrigued by this thing and now Brian has to explain it. What a mood-killer!
Telling Justin to be careful wasn't a great idea: he is so prompt to serve the country that helped him becoming a pilot that he can't stay away from the fight. Brian is right: it could change the future and he won't be able to prevent anything else. Tough choice.
Mr. Hobbs is the other dangerous element in this story. Is he also in the army? I would guess so in such a period. If yes, is he also in the RAF?
Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Boogie Woogie
Great wooing! As Brian doesn't care what he looks like, he's quite free to act as he wants, except the period of time that doesn't allow everything he would like to do.
It's funny how Brian can afford to live in such hotel while he wasn't meant to be, due to his background.
I loved the game he played with Justin while they were waiting to eat. It's a great way to balance the levels.
Justin's education is starting: yeah! Lucky him and us!
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.
Brian's lucked out. But I'm more worried about Hobbs.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:09 am Title: Chapter 11 - All The Things You Are.
Brian's light box thing sure is annoying! Lol Justin is definitely going to think Brian is some sort of spy, imo. Fancy gadgets and all. Can't wait to see how he handles him actually being from the future. Freaking Hobbs, perfect timing. Ugh
Date: Nov 17, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Boogie Woogie
Love long chapters!!! Lots of wooing going on. lol Of course Justin can swing dance like a boss! Brian 'teaching' Justin how to give a blowjob....hmmmmmm
Best line of the chapter..."I'm not a fucking gangster Justin" lmao more long chapters please!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 1:52 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Boogie Woogie
What a fun time they had that evening. Your look into the past is amazing.
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 9 - On The Sunny Side of the Street
Awww. Such a wonderful time. It's almost a shame that Brian won't be able to stay.
Author's Response:
What makes you think he can’t stay? Maybe Brian will decide he loves the simplicity of 1941. Plus, could be a multi-millionaire there if he just has Cynthia print him up more money... lol. TAG
Date: Nov 15, 2017 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 9 - On The Sunny Side of the Street
Wow! Justin was so scared and sweet talking about sex...good thing Brian is the guy he is and not someone who'd take advantage. Loved all the history and photos! Great chapter!
Date: Nov 15, 2017 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 9 - On The Sunny Side of the Street
Brian isn't really good with patience, but he wants to get Justin comfortable with what is coming, so waiting it is. I feared that Chris would have been there to see them together, during Brian's faux pas.
It's great that they can share some time together, outside, in the calm, before the next storm.
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2017 4:27 am Title: Chapter 8 - Lullaby of Birdland
I'm glad to see that they were able to hook up. Maybe once Justin's rested they can enjoy the bed.