Date: Dec 16, 2017 8:14 am Title: Chapter 25
Good information, filled lots of gaps.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 11:31 am Title: Chapter 24
We are making progress. I'm glad Jen is on their side. I love it when she gets all WASPy.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Dec 12, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 24
Linsey's facination with Justin is highly questionable. She's also WAAAAAAAAAY out of her league when it comes to Jen. Jennifer ws able to get much needed info without any effort or with Lindsey realizing what all she was telling her. L really isn't that smart of a WASP is she? I don't think she's very smart overall actually.
Is Brian going to e upset with all that Justin has been up to? Will he understand? Really glad that Jenn is on his side again. That she's looking out for BOTH B&J. I think she's finally understanding all that Brian was going through with Michae and Deb.
Another great chapter! Lindsey is going to go DOWN! LOL!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2017 4:43 am Title: Chapter 24
WASPs meeting and thoughts' battle: Lindsey can't win that; at least she agreed to go back with Mel.
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2017 1:48 am Title: Chapter 24
My, my, Jennifer Taylor is a godess in my eyes. She managed to outwit another wasp and learned something that Lindsay never ment to tell. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2017 1:37 am Title: Chapter 24
Lindsay never learned how to be a proper Wasp cause she was too busy making up her own rules and seeing each of her schemes fall apart.
Now Jennifer is a True Wasp and she knows how to play a wannabe against herself.
Lindsay admits to Carl what happened on the record and gets a few weeks to act like Queen of the Manor before she is kicked out on her flat ass.
I do believe Hunter can take on Lindsay but I would love Jennifer to cut her down.
If I were Brian and Justin I would have that house destroyed and the grounds blessed to ward off the evil that was allowed to trespass on it.
So Brian got Jennifer to tell him what Justin is up to and soon hopefully they will start talking about everything again.
Date: Dec 11, 2017 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh this story just gets better and better. Can't wait for Lindsay to get hers.
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2017 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 23
Deb and Michael are about to learn Never Piss Off A Twink With Loads Of Money, especially when his name Justin Taylor-Kinney!
Justin knows Deb craves the attention and power she has at the diner so his man Ryan is slowly stripping her of it lol
For Michael it his fantasy world of comics and superhero memorabilia so by jacking up the price on Michael's former collection he is guaranteeing that Michael won't have a dime to fight for custody of Jenny. (Not That He Even Wants It!!)
So Justin is buying up Liberty Avenue does that also mean he might want to purchase a certain gallery too? ;) <evil cackle>
Brian is seeing that the boy he met at fourteen is not the same person he knows now (though I think Michael was manipulative at fourteen too after all look who his mother is!), and that Michael and even Ben played on his need to be needed, instead of seeing the truth which he noticed off and on he chose friendship over family.
Now that Brian sees has cruel, controlling and manipulating Deb and Michael are he is seeing how easily they played him and how Justin didn't, wouldn't, never tried to do that.
Justin allowed Brian to have his family and closed himself off to their cruelty disguised as joking.
Brian and Justin have Alot to talk about while they are away for a few weeks.
What plan does Lindsay have to keep the money flowing and has anything checked the support balance for Gus?
Lindsay is a Wasp and they are all about self-preservation above anything else.
Love an update when you see the start of Michael and Deb's world crumbling, now what about Lindsay? :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2017 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 23
Love how Justin is buying up Liberty Avenue. Hope that Brian got a clue that Michael was playing him. Can't wait for another chapter it's so good.
Date: Dec 10, 2017 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 23
I guess Brian's nightmares will lessen while Deb's and Michael's will start.
Deb will fall from the pedestal she thinks she is on. As for Michael, he will buy new collectibles with the money he has and will end with nothing to support his lifestyle.
I'm curious to see if Justin will accept a meeting with Deb.
Date: Dec 10, 2017 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 23
Very good chapter. It is time that the Novotneys see the light and that they don't own Brian. You are doing a great job.
Date: Dec 08, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 22
oh wow- don't piss off Justin. Hopefully Brian and Justin will get away from all the drama and take the offer of the beach house. Too much stuff going on to risk his health and he needs all his energy to fight the health issues.
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2017 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 22
Jenny definitely needs therapy too that poor child has been through so much and with the games Michael, Deb and Lindsay are playing she is caught in the middle of childish games.
Mel is making the effort to fix it but first they have to get Lindsay to admit the truth so she can get her out of their lives.
Michael may live Jenny but he doesn't want to grow up and be responsible for her, he just wants to remain fourteen forever with Brian, his toys, comics and fantasies of that unfinished hand job.
Brian, Justin and Cameron getting away is good Brian will have enough to deal with without Michael, Deb and Lindsay trying to upset him more.
Deb better stay away from Jennifer or else she is going to wish she was never born.
Justin is one smart cookie he has a lot more power than Deb and Michael realize and they are going to regret crossing him.
Makes me wonder what the people of Liberty Avenue think about Deb and Michael cause they probably have been ranting about how evil Justin is and how selfish Brian is being 'After All They Have Done For Him'??
Wonderful Update :)
Date: Dec 07, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
Woohoo!!! GO JUSTIN! Oh man....that is going to be priceless when Deb and Michael find out! LOL! They are going to be pissed as hell and will make life hell for justin and Brian I'm sure...but boy oh boy...it'll be worth it! LOL!!
HEart is breaking for Jenny. Poor thing. She doesn't get the manipulative natures of Deb and Michael. I can't believe what Micheal threatened to Jenny. Never mind what he said about he and Brian before Justin came along. OH boy....those 2 have GOT to go DOWN!!!!
Hopefully B&J are able to get away for a bit. I'm sure shit will hit the fan over it but whatever....
As for Lindsey, while I understand why, doesn't mean I have to like it. she just doesn't deserve to live in that house only to become lady of the manor. It'll be so difficult now to get her out!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2017 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
I’m with Justin, I can’t stand the idea of Lindsay getting to play Lady of the manor in Brian’s house just like she wanted, especially considering her behaviour- it’s like she’s being rewarded for not telling the truth and aiding Michael, I hope she gets her comeuppance soon! Poor Jenny, she’s in a really unenviable spot here, glad they’re helping her see the truth.
Date: Dec 07, 2017 11:38 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh this is really getting good. I just love this story even though it has alot of heartache, but I just have a feeling that in the end it will be happy (please).
Date: Dec 07, 2017 11:31 am Title: Chapter 22
Poor Jenny. She doesn't know who to believe. She needs to at least trust in Hunter and Gus. They won't steer her wrong.
Yes, lets go to the beach. They need to get away from everything. Brian's chemo will be enough to deal with.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Dec 07, 2017 7:39 am Title: Chapter 22
I hope Jenny will change her mind and see her father and grandmother for what they really are: abusive liars.
If Justin goes revengeful, it will be a nightmare for the Novotnys and they won't be able to stop him. Taking Jenny to get what they want is the last straw for Justin.
Date: Dec 07, 2017 5:28 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh Justin you evil genus.
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2017 5:19 am Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad that Jenny finally heard the truth and love what Justin has planned for the Novotneys. Serves them right.
Date: Dec 06, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 21
Wow- Hopefully Mel will live up to her promise and work with Brian and Justin for Jenny's sake. Michael- well , he should be kicked to the curb
Date: Dec 05, 2017 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 21
What a chapter! Dense, full of emotions and a beginning of acceptance from Mel, even if she has a long road ahead of her.
At least, she sees what she must do for her kids.
Date: Dec 05, 2017 4:53 am Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad that Alex and Mel got to the bottom of some of Mel's issues with Brian and found the rat dead and stinking at the end of it all...Lindsay! Lawd Ham Turkey and Grits, she really did a number on Melanie. I wish there was a way to lock Lindsay up for emotional abuse. Those are always the scars that hurt worse than physical pain.
BTW, I LOVE Cynthia and Jen! Both started the process with their harsh, but true words to Mel. Hopefully, she will take it all to heart and change for the better, even if she has to pretend to be going back to Lindsay for a time.
UGH!! Now there's a tough pill to swallow, no matter how necessary! Even though I know it's a necessary evil to get the she-bitch to tell the truth of things, I still don't like that she's seemingly not going to pay for any of her pefidy. It seems almost like she's going to be rewarded for being a backstabbing shrew. The fact that she said nothing to confirm or deny Mel hitting her, guarantees that she can't be charged with filing a false report. But I wonder if she can be jailed for withholding exculpatory evidence, which would have kept Mel from being arrested in the first place...Hm, something I'll have to research myself for the future.
Can I just say, BOOK'EM, HORVATH!! Bonnie and Clyde- Mother and Son edition are sharing a cell at Chez Pitts P.D., which is as it should be. Hopefully there will be a way to keep them locked up until Mel, Brian and Justin are able to gather all of the evidence needed to thwart their attempts to gain custody of Jenny. No doubt, it's a ploy for extortion via child support because I doubt either of them really wants Jenny for anything else. They are too much like Lindsay, in that they are beyond greedy, needy and seedy both in words and deeds. But you know what they say about birds of a feather and Twit Trio of Queen Dumbelina, Tweedleedee and Tweedleedumb, definitely are.
I can't wait for the next installment!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 21
Mel has a long road ahead of her and finally holding up a mirror to her relationship with Lindsay and the kids is a good start, but she still has to see that Brian is no saint but he doesn't hide behind others when he screws up.
Justin and Brian willing to help Mel shows that they are working to help Gus and Jenny, Mel has to help herself cause they aren't going to fix all her messes.
Lindsay will love living in that big house just to gloat, flaunt and make her dreams about having the world at her feet come true.
I am really surprised that Michael and Deb haven't tried to confront Justin before the restraining orders were issued.
It is and it will be Explosive!!!
Date: Dec 05, 2017 4:35 am Title: Chapter 21
Great, great great. I love this Brian and Justin. I hope Mel gets her shit together. The therapy session are intense.