Date: Oct 18, 2017 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Patrick is so perceptive with Bree.
Gus and Ray will have a whole month together, in London? What a Christmas gift!
Brian talking to the dog was hilarious, yet, very sweet, even if Brian doesn't do sweet.
Author's Response: Oh, Brian does sweet, but he never admits it. LOL
Date: Oct 18, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
Brian is worried about Gus because he knows what he would have done had he come to NY at Gus' age.
I could only imagine what an exceptional mess it must be in Bree's room if she started packing for London.
It seems that Gus and Ray didn't start the heavy stuff: that's quite surprising coming from teens.
Author's Response: I love the way you imagine what's happening. Thanks for commenting.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love the scenes with Brian and Emmett!
Author's Response: Thanks, I like them too.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 4:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Ha ha ha, the end and Brian's nose...
It's courageous for Joan to talk about Brian's Christmas or lack of.
Author's Response: Joan may need to apologize., but she is improving.
Date: Oct 16, 2017 4:14 am Title: Chapter 7
Christmas spirit is a little bruised! Bree knows what she wants and how to get it.
Author's Response: Bree is a modern girl.
Date: Oct 15, 2017 8:25 am Title: Chapter 6
The two giants are afraid to have Bree with them: that's quite funny.
I loved these quotes:
“I’m ready to play with your organ when we get home.”
Justin burst out laughing. “You give a whole new meaning to the spirit of Christmas.”
Brian waggled his eyebrows and climbed behind the wheel. Time for some Christmas spirit, Kinney style.
Author's Response: Glad you liked all this.
Date: Oct 15, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 5
I feared a little with Lindsey's trip on memory lane, but she stopped and gave a great summary about the children' lives.
Author's Response: Never fear. LOL
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 9:51 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh my...I hate when these stories end
I want more. I do want to see them back at Ednas Treasure
Please Please
Author's Response: Coming soon.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 18
I luv how Justin keeps helping Brian from falling deeper into the hole with Bree. I don't think I have said I like how you handle Gus and Ray...so sweet.They do have great parents
Author's Response: Thanks, they are kind of ideal families, even though they are outside the norms.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 17
Brian had to love all the adulation....but more importantly he values his relationship Justin, whom he adores
Author's Response: That's the most important thing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
Of course Brian would take Justin to the baths LOL Don't blame Bree for being bored
Author's Response: LOL
Date: Oct 14, 2017 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Now Winona and her mother are starting to barge in Brian's personal space.
A little tension between Gus and Bree for a simple adjective: he should be careful as she is so attentive to what he does/says. Justin found a way to make Gus' point more obvious.
Brian is very considerate with Ted, but Ted is not very perceptive: I loved the way Brian had to go from Ted to Schmidt (and Teddy in the middle) when Ted didn't realize what Brian was trying to tell him.
Author's Response: Winona and her mother are certainly a pair.
Date: Oct 14, 2017 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love the moments Bree and Brian share, but I also love the one between father and son.
Bree completely missed her "surprise" act for Gus and it was funny and sweet at the same time.
Author's Response: I love your comments about relationships in this story. So happy you see them that way.
Date: Oct 14, 2017 6:34 am Title: Chapter 15
Short lesson
Author's Response: Yes.
Date: Oct 14, 2017 6:30 am Title: Chapter 2
Monica and Sarah phone call: are they friends or is it just the way they talk?
Bree was funny with her "do not touch" and reward questions. She will go crazy when Gus will be at her concert.
Author's Response: :)
Date: Oct 14, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 14
What is Brian going to buy now...? What building for a new office in the UK?
Author's Response: You never know.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 6:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Are you kidding "Henry Higgins" LOL
Author's Response: Of course we're kidding, but that's the name we chose. LOL
Date: Oct 14, 2017 3:25 am Title: Chapter 12
Ugh
Author's Response: Okay?
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 2:48 am Title: Chapter 10
Next generation doing the party thing !!!!
Author's Response: You got it.
Date: Oct 14, 2017 2:15 am Title: Chapter 8
Brian's nose Ha Ha Ha
Author's Response: So pleased you're enjoying this file.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 7
Laughed so hard I think I wet myself..
Thank you Beautiful job
Author's Response: OMG, thanks so much for this comment.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 1:34 am Title: Chapter 6
Those two big guys are going to be run thru their paces by a very smart little girl...I',m with Brian. Luv the Xmas fairies
Author's Response: LOL That little girl has a way about her.
Date: Oct 14, 2017 1:03 am Title: Chapter 4
OK lesson learned Bree shares
Author's Response: Yes she does.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 12:46 am Title: Chapter 3
Got to luv Bree
Author's Response: We hope everybody does.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2017 12:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Ethan? an au pair? What the hell !!!!
Author's Response: LOL