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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 1:18 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hendrik's parents have lost everything due to their bigotry. What a shame.

Brian went to prom. Brian was Justin's first. Brian let him go to find happiness. Justin thinks they're just friends? Boy does he have alot to learn. Ha!



Author's Response:

I knew you would like those little tidbits about Brian and Justin's history. At this point in our story, Justin was still in denial about his feelings for Brian. It will come out in a later chapter. Brian was so convinced that Hendrick was better for Justin. There's a flashback about a little talk between Brian and Hendrick. It will all make sense later, I promise :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

Good that Brian spelled it out to Tony, though when you think about it he shouldn't have to.  Brian gets to be with Justin and Tony gets to be with Gibbs.  Win/win.



Author's Response:

Tony's actually pretty smart but needed Brian to spell it out. I still blame it on Tony's mind, because it was clouded with jealousy.
Brian will be there for Justin, no matter what. Tony will soon see that Brian is not the enemy.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

Tony had some difficulties understanding Brian's message.

Brian will take care of Justin and will have to tell him about Hendrik: tough time to come.



Author's Response:

Justin will go through a very hard time grieving and dealing with his feelings towards Brian, which confuses him.
But he has Gibbs and Tony to help and listen to him :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

I liked it, just too short

Tony really needs it spelled out for him doesn't he? 

Brian won't have any problem taking care of his Sunshine. Gibbs can rest easy.



Author's Response:

I know, some chapters are short. I'm still glad you like it :)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

Interesting g Twitter to have Gibbs be Justin's 'Dad'... TAG



Author's Response:

We had to find a way to connect the two worlds and it made sense :)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 8:35 am Title: Chapter 2

Very perplexing - I've got no clue what's going on yet, except I'm wondering where Justin is . . . ? TAG



Author's Response:

I hope the following chapters helped you to figure out a few things?

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2017 8:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Well, that was a pretty shocking opening chapter. Lol. I'm so glad there's already a second chapter up so I'm not left on THAT cliff. TAG

PS. Thanks again for posting this story with KD. We need more cross-overs. I like the diversity. 



Author's Response:

Lol I know. It was quite a bit of a surprise for a few.
PS: You're very welcome. I'm glad that it's received so positively here on KD.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

Tony will have to start acting like his heart is telling him to do. If Gibbs needs help, it will be THE opportunity to do so.

Very sad story about Jennifer. So, Craig isn't Justin's father?



Author's Response:

That he does. Hopefully he will follow his heart and understand what Brian tried to tell him.
It could be Craig but also someone else. Justin's sperm donor wasn't supposed to be a big topic since he always had Gibbs and utlimately for Justin, Gibbs is his dad and always will be :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 1:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter.  Very informative.  Never saw Brian so open mouthed - lol.  He gave Tony hints and Tony didn't get them.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)
Yeah, Tony is a little slow here. But that's a bit understandable since his mind was clouded by worry, focus on the job and jealousy. He still sees Brian as the enemy at this point.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

No Craig Taylor this time. Yay!

How sad, no one would help Jennifer. But look what she got out of it. A father for Justin. I like how both Justin and Gibbs got into the family.

Hobbs and the fiddler both attacked Justin? Those weasles are probably involved with the bombing. They won't get off so easy this time except by each other behind bars.

Brian Kinney playing matchmaker. Who would have thunk it? Ha! Who's going to do that for him?

 



Author's Response:

Exactly! Who needs Craig? He stopped being a dad to Justin.
I know the backstory of how Jennifer met Gibbs is really sad but turned out great for all of them.
Yep, they both did but Justin only really remembers Hobbs attacking him so he's usually just talking about Hobbs.

I think Brian did a good job as matchmaker, didn't he? Nobody can blame him for Tony being a bit slow lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2017 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

At the end of chapter 2, I thought Gibbs and Brian would have been at Babylon and thought also about the bombing, but I didn't guess what was happening when the bomb exploded.

Interesting and intriguing beginning; even if I don't know NICS, I know Mark Harmon is staring in it and he's an amazing actor (he was great in "The West Wing" and "Presidio").

As for what Tony found out in the first chapter: did that happen because Brian was crushed when he learned about Justin getting married? Do Gibbs and Brian have a "friends with benefits" rule or was it a one shot (no pun intended)?



Author's Response:

YES! Mark Harmon is a sweetheart and the best. I love him but I shouldn't get into this now or my response would be longer than the entire story lol

As for your question: No. They do got together more than once but it was more for comfort. Of course Brian was heart broken about Justin getting married but he loved Justin and thought Hendrick was better for him than Brian. Later chapters will include more about Justin/Hendrick/Brian, I promise. And we will also reveal why Brian wasn't topping Gibbs later. There's still a lot coming since Andi agreed that our beta Loahisi and I would post the full story here - not the shortened one he posted on his Tibbs account. NCIS fans wanted more Tibbs and less focus on Brian and Justin but you will get the full version :)

Thank you for your review and compliment. The next chapter is coming. Sandy xoxo

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ok wait Gibbs....Dad....Justin!!! How the hell and what's the back story to that?

May not be connnected but it seems like Brian and Gibbs are cut from the same cloth. In love but won't let the other person know.

Is Justin hurt again? Did Hendrik make it?

Agrr I want more...now!

Nice of Fornell to let Tony know how proud Gibbs is of him

 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that the relationship between Gibbs and Justin surprised you. The back story is coming, I promise :)

Gibbs and Brian do have a lot in common but of course there will be a happy end.

Justin was hurt, yes and he'll be dealing with a lot but he has his dad, Tony and of course Brian supporting him.

Next chapter will be posted right away :)

Thank you!!! Sandy xoxo

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2017 2:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, didn't see that coming.  So Justin is Gibbs son, sort of,  and was going to marry Hendrik.  And Gibbs thinks Tony's straight and Tony thought Gibbs was.  So how do you manage to set them both 'straight'.  



Author's Response:

We had to find a way to connect the gang with Gibbs and since we never liked Craig we came up with this.

I can tell you this: Brian plays a big part in getting Tony and Gibbs closer, even though Tony's jealousy won't let him realize it right away. As for Brian and Justin, it takes a little longer for them to get their acts together but Justin is still grieving and Brian's two besties are not really helping them.

Thank you. Sandy xoxo

Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2017 9:15 am Title: Chapter 3

I can hardly wait for the next update. I'm hooked after only 3 chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I promise to update as fast as I can :) Sandy xoxo

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2017 6:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm really looking forward to reading this. Both series are faves of mine. Sorry I didn't get a chance to look at your posting earlier. TAG



Author's Response:

That's fine, no need to worry. We actually added the parts about QaF that we didn't post on my friend's Tibbs acount. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2017 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

First off - love the banners they are super cool.  I'm a Tibbs shipper myself.  It's great that Abby and Tim did their thing and identified Bri.  Did you move Babylon to Washington D.C.?  Keep 'em coming.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! I try to have a different banner for each chapter. Hopefully I'll be able to finish them soon.

I loved to write that part, especially their chat about how good looking Brian is. Tony's jealousy was fun, too.
Yes, everything is in Washington D.C. here - Babylon, Liberty Avenue... Made more sense.

Thank you for your reviews. I'm glad you like the story so far.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2017 4:56 am Title: Chapter 2

Great job. Just like an episode.

Why id Tim afraid to go to Babylon? Is hevhiding sometjing too in your story?



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and compliment. We appeciate it.

No, he's not hiding anything. The McGee from the first seasons was rather shy, nervous and insecure a lot and we wanted a little bit of that for him :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2017 2:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting take on my two favorite shows.  I'll enjoy seeing where you take us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Tony has it bad. I guess he never wondered why Gibbs' marriages never worked out after his first wife was killed. Now he knows.

Can't wait to find why Brian, the ultimate top, was caught bottoming.

Ooh this is going to be good. More soon please.



Author's Response:

Yes, he does. My co-writer wanted us to focus on Tony's feelings in the first chapters. 
It has actually nothing to do with Brian but with Gibbs.

Thank you for your comment. We appreciate it :)

Reviewer: loahisi Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

So glad to see you post this story here. I have to get back to work on the last chapter before you post them. You and Andy did a great job with this story.



Author's Response:

I really wasn't sure about posting it here or not since the focus is more on NCIS and Andi actually left out the good QaF parts I wrote :/
Still, I was so glad to do this story tho. My favorite shows and characters...

Thank you for your compliment. :)

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