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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2018 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 25

Finally, Justin honestly explains why all of this happened. If Brian doesn't understand, I don't know what will make him. Maybe he is just keeping Justin on the burning plate to see how he will react because I think he got what Justin is telling.

Who is daring interrupting them? Someone who has the key: Michael would be my first guess, Lindsay would be my second; I bet she would not agree with what Justin is thinking: coming back home.

Don't worry, there are still people reading this great story!



Author's Response:

For the first time Justin is finally telling Brian what he feels and not telling Brian what he thinks he wants to hear.   I think this is a pivotal point in their relationship.  Lindsay and Michael have no filters when it comes to Brian.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2018 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 25

Finally, Justin has come clean about the real reason.  Now just who is their unexpected guest?



Author's Response:

Justin feels safe telling Brian.  Brian is finally talking about his feelings and their past.  Some good cane from the amnesia.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2018 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 24- It Seemed Like a Good Idea At The Time

I really love the way Brian and Jennifer are together; they are serious and can joke easily.

Daphne arrived just on time to defuse a situation starting to get hot (not in a life affirming way).



Author's Response:

Yes. In my universe Jennifer and Brian make a great team.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2018 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 24- It Seemed Like a Good Idea At The Time

At least Daphne listens and it sounds like she might have suggestions.  What to do when you're caught in a catch 22?



Author's Response:

Daphne has always been on Justin's side but it is a difficult situation.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

I want to give our boys such a big cuddle :( they BOTH need one here lol



Author's Response:

The pain they are both feelings is difficult for them.  They are supportive of each other and at least they are talking.  

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

I want to give our boys such a big cuddle :( they BOTH need one here lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 23- The Moment of Truth

He got his memory back and even remembers the prom.  Boy I wouldn't want to be him when he has his talk with Brian.  Brian is not happy that he was working as a stripper.



Author's Response:

I totally agree.  Brian is thrilled that he is okay but now has to deal with the reason he is in situation in the first place.



Author's Response:

I totally agree.  Brian is thrilled that he is okay but now has to deal with the reason he is in situation in the first place.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 4:50 am Title: Chapter 23- The Moment of Truth

Huge emotional step! So many memories are back and just a few negative.



Author's Response:

This was a big chapter-  So many memories-  now that they are actually talking, maybe they will talk about the prom and some other things

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2018 12:53 am Title: Chapter 9- Jennifer's Truth

Aw, slowly Justin is starting to remember things. Love that he remembered the ice cream lol



Author's Response:

I really liked this chapter.  There is so much conversation and oh ha moments. Who wouldn't remember Brian Kinney licking ice cream =  ymm

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 22- Thumpa Thumpa

Babylon was a good idea, but it triggered good and bad memories to come back.



Author's Response:

WE don't get to only keep our good memories, even when we don't have amnesia.  Hoping that Justin's memories continue to bring them closer and keep them talking.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2018 1:15 am Title: Chapter 22- Thumpa Thumpa

Who'd a thought babylon would trigger so many memories.  One memory triggering another.



Author's Response:

Of course, the ultimate question is how does Brian answer Justin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2018 1:39 am Title: Chapter 21- Dinner With The Family

Love how well Molly gets along with Brian.  That must piss Craig off big time.



Author's Response:

Anything that would piss off Craig would be something both Justin and Brian would embrace.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2018 10:00 am Title: Chapter 21- Dinner With The Family

Molly is so much like her brother: poor Jennifer; she is in for some troubled weeks/months to come. At least, Babylon experiment will be with Brian and it's a gay club, therefore, the risks will be limited.



Author's Response:

I love the interaction between Molly, Jennifer and Brian.  I think in my universe, Brian has a fondness for all things Taylor.  He is protective of Molly and I think Justin would be too, so Brian would be protective, just by proxy. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2018 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 20- Living In The Moment

Some things never change, but some others are improving very fast.

So glad Brian is talking about the cancer.



Author's Response:

I really enjoy this time between the two men as they talk and share many events in their lives.  I like to think Brian has learned to trust his feelings more at this point.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2018 1:51 pm Title: Chapter 20- Living In The Moment

Justin is remembering more and more.



Author's Response:

Yes, he is and they both are beginning to talk about issues that should have been discussed long ago. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2018 2:08 am Title: Chapter 19- Twenty Questions

Would telling him why be so bad?

 



Author's Response:

I think Brian is reluctant to tell Justin that he lives in New York because it would give him more information about him as an artist.  It would also bring up what he was doing-  ie stripping and Justin has not remembered that part of his life.  Brian is still trying to go slow. He's happy that Justin remembers them and he is content to leave it at that if he could

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2018 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 19- Twenty Questions

Great step for them coming to Britin: some more memories and much more questions.



Author's Response:

I loved that they made love when they got there.  But, yes, so many questions

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 18- Brian Kinney Loves Me

Justin is all but persistent: he had to ask this question again!

So glad he is remembering "them" as a "couple" and that Brian doesn't react badly to this notion as he did before.



Author's Response:

Brian is just relieved that Justin is remembering them as a couple.  He is so happy and he's not gun shy anymore.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2018 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 18- Brian Kinney Loves Me

Now Justin gets to the important question.  Why he was in NY.  At least he remembers them together so things should go well for a while.



Author's Response:

He is remembering them as a couple. As Brian said to himself- he can handle anything now that Justin knows they are together.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2018 1:20 am Title: Chapter 17- The Artist

Except for wanting to know where his studio is which will lead to wanting to know why he's in NY everything is just dandy.



Author's Response:

Just Dandy.  They are going down the rabbit hole-  one answer leads to another question-  dominoes are US.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 16- Am I The Color Of Your World?

Tell him the truth.  It can't hurt.



Author's Response:

Brian is still afraid of telling Justin too much, too soon.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2018 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 15-Out of the Mouth of Babes

Justin's remembering.  I can't wait till he remembers Lindsay pushing him to go to NY.  



Author's Response:

I think that will really be an interesting reveal.  I'm not a Lindsey lover, so...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2018 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 17- The Artist

It's a tough choice that Brian has to make, but he should go to NY with Justin even if it may cause some problems.

I real love the relationship that Jennifer and Brian have built.



Author's Response:

I think the relationship between Brian and Jennifer would really be like this-  I think in the show, she was really upset that they broke off the engagement.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2018 9:50 am Title: Chapter 16- Am I The Color Of Your World?

Yes, Justin is a very smart and persistent little twat: of course he would ask where he paints as there is nothing in the loft apart some supplies for drawing.

I loved "Am I the color in your world, Brian?" It's really a great way to qualify Justin's place in Brian's ordered, monochrome environment.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!.   Sometimes the title of a chapter jsut comes to you and this one is one of those.  Justin usually lives in color but right now he is stuggling to see how he fits in.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2018 12:42 am Title: Chapter 8- The Pink Elephant in the Living Room

This must be so confusing to him, and he must feel so alien amongst those he knows he should be most comfortable with. Poor guy!



Author's Response:

Absolutely.  He feels like such an outsider-  well sort of-  he knows Gus, Brian etc but he doesn't know them like he thinks he should.  Very difficult.

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