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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 38- The Truth Hurts

The message was loud and clear: how long before the "best" friends come back for more remarks?

Britin is Justin's heaven: I hope he will paint his soul and his happiness.

I don't remember if he told Brian about what happened to NYC.



Author's Response:

Best friends is such a misnomer.  Three only people who believe they are Brian's beat friends are Lindsay and Michael.  I wonder what the others think of that.  



Author's Response:

Best friends is such a misnomer.  Three only people who believe they are Brian's beat friends are Lindsay and Michael.  I wonder what the others think of that.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2018 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 37 Family 2.0

Lindsay and Michael are too weird.  Thinking they know what's best for Justin or accusing Justin when it's none of their business.  Thank God for Emmett and Deb.  I'm sure Ted is on Brian & Justin's side as well.  He'll help defend them from the other two.



Author's Response:

So sorry I missed your comment.  Emmett has always been a friend but Deb runs hot and cold.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 37 Family 2.0

Well done! It won't be enough to stop Lindsey and Michael though, but the rest of the family is supportive and won't let the duo mess with Brian and Justin.



Author's Response:

Brian is his biggest supporter and now that he has finally figured out that he wants Justin around, nothing will stop the two of them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 36

I agree with Daphne.



Author's Response:

Daphne always had his back

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2018 3:52 am Title: Chapter 36

Weird situation, but Justin should tell Brian.



Author's Response:

He's afraid how he will respond

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2018 4:02 am Title: Chapter 35- The Whole Truth

Exactly what is it he hasn't told Brian?  I know Daphne witll help whatever it is.



Author's Response:

Hopefully Daphne will get him to share.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2018 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 35- The Whole Truth

Oh, Justin has been hiding some important fact(s); I hope Daphne will find out and maybe urge Justin to tell Brian. It can't be good.



Author's Response:

HHe trusts Daphne to support him

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2018 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 34- Back Where I Belong

SO behind on this story. going to have to go back and catch up. Apologies if you get bombarded with new reviews hehe :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for writing and letting me know you are enjoying the story.  Enjoy the reread.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2018 7:20 pm Title: Chapter 34- Back Where I Belong

Great chapter: so happy that they are moving forward and Justin is getting better every day. Let's see how the extended family will react to that new development. Lindsay will be angry, Michael will be jealous, Emmett and Debbie will be very happy, Ted will be relieved that Brian is getting Justin back.



Author's Response:

Sometimes I think that it would be so much better if the family didn't interfere- but then we wouldn't have fodder for fanfic.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2018 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 33- The Truth Or Is It?

Things are working out.  Justin gets to stay in Pitts. and come to New York and he also gets Brian to do the same.



Author's Response:

Brian now has an excuse to be in New York

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2018 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 33- The Truth Or Is It?

Justin is still trying to convince himself about his decision; explaining it to Jake reinforce that.a



Author's Response:

Justin is excited but has trepidations.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2018 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 32- It's Off To New York We Go

It's great that they agreed on a few apartments. The shopping was interesting and a great teasing.

The end is quite moody and Justin should understand why Brian is acting this way; I bet he didn't think Jake would talk about the job as if Justin was back for that.



Author's Response:

Yes,  I loved writing the shopping piece, but I could oh so see them doing that.  Justin is still not 100% ready for super supportive Brian.  After all he was stripping because he didn't want Brian to support him.  It isn't going to change his mind overnight.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2018 2:51 am Title: Chapter 32- It's Off To New York We Go

I'm so glad that Justin is letting Brian have his way.  Helping Justin makes Brian happy.  So no more stripping for Justin.



Author's Response:

Brian likes to take care of Justin and Justin is now ready to do this.  He has realized that his stripping has caused so many problems and that now he must trust Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 4:59 am Title: Chapter 31- Moving On Up

Positive attitude, moving forward and planning for the future: great piece of life, showing what they would live in the coming weeks.



Author's Response:

Brian wants to make sure that Justin has all the necessities taken care of and that he can concentrate on the important stuff- painting and showing his work.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 4:45 am Title: Chapter 30- Introspection is a Bitch

Another "inner thoughts" night: you are scaring me and at the same time, it's great that they think about that and most important: they talk and share; that's a game changing attitude.



Author's Response:

Each man is fearful of the unknown, but they will meet this next challenge together.  At least, now they are talking, instead of guessing what each other is thinking.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2018 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 31- Moving On Up

Brian has it all planned out and that's a good thing.



Author's Response:

I think in this instance Justin needs to let Brian take over. He has always wanted this but it is still really overwhelming.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2018 3:59 am Title: Chapter 30- Introspection is a Bitch

They talked and Brian said what needed to be said.



Author's Response:

Absolutely. Brian is sometimes a man of few words, but he chooses them carefully.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2018 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 29- A Multitude of Conversations

Rocky ending: Brian is concerned with Justin's decision; as they are both stubborn and not well communicating, I hope they will settle for a compromise and try to move on.



Author's Response:

Brian wants to trust Justin but he is concerned with his health.  While he loves having him at Britin, he's still not quite convinced this is where he needs to be.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2018 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 28- The Meeting

Justin's memory seems to do tricky things: he must lose lots of energy thinking and analyzing if his flash backs are real/recent or not.

Apart from this, Brian and Justin seem at their best; I love how Brian can touch Justin in a non-sexual way, to calm him. This is very intimate.

Carol is up for a big surprise when she will discover that there aren't so many pieces to show.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2018 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 29- A Multitude of Conversations

It's sad to see them at odds with each other.  But together they are awesome.



Author's Response:

Its tough for them, but together they are awesome-  absolutely.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2018 2:50 am Title: Chapter 28- The Meeting

Oh my.  Just what does Carol think Justin has been doing.  When he had time time to do any pieces?



Author's Response:

Carol knows about the accident but the reality of knowing and understanding what that means for the person involved are two different things.  She is supportive of Justin, after all he will make her a lot of money.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2018 9:40 am Title: Chapter 27- Thinking Is Over Rated

Justin is as naughty as Brian is receptive: they are so well suited for each other.

They finally talked and it seemed that they agree on a temporary solution, even if Justin is fighting it, he can't say "no".



Author's Response:

While Brian does not like to talk, he and Justin do talk when it is important.  They just do it in private as their private lives are important to them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2018 3:54 am Title: Chapter 27- Thinking Is Over Rated

Just when Brian gets his way, Justin gets his big break.  No wonder Justin's not feeling well.  I do believe that Justin hears Michael's voice accusing him of taking advantage of Brian and that's part of the problem.



Author's Response:

Their timing the is not the best.  Justin always feels pressured to show that he is not living off of Brian, hence why he was dancing to begin with.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2018 4:48 am Title: Chapter 26- For the Love of Oreos

Out of the mouth of babes.  Gus is so smart.  Lindsay is not as smart as she thinks she is.



Author's Response:

Gus is so observant. He knows Brian is happier when Justin is there😀

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2018 3:48 am Title: Chapter 26- For the Love of Oreos

It was Lindsey then: how could she come in without buzzing, just like she was home! And her questions about Justin, then her remark about bedrooms! Thanks for making Brian reply.

Gus is hilarious: goofy dreamer and so observant; I hope he did see what the boys were doing and will ask innocently something later. Justin will become red in a nano second!

Yeah, Brian smiles when Justin is present: lest hope he will listen to his son's remarks.



Author's Response:

Lindsay is so transparent. She wants Justin gone because when he is gone she has more potential for Brian's attention.  I love Oreo discussion.  Guys is so onto his dad.

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