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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 47

Great way for Brian to let Justin know that he loves him.

Now that the cat is out of the bag, I hope that Justin will stop his drama princess act and work to get his confidence back.

Brian and the critic: I bet that will be quite interesting and witty.



Author's Response:

Yes, I do love that sex scene where Brian is making Justin say over and over again that he is worthwhile.  Brian and the critic- should be interesting

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 46-Whispered Words of Encouragement

Brian's arrival was epic! The banter between Brian and Daphne was hilarious!

The rest of the chapter was burning hot! Brian knows how to change Justin's mind or, at least, how to make him lose it for some time.



Author's Response:

Just thinking about Brian and Justin in bed is hot. Glad you agree.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2018 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 47

Justin doesn't realize that Brian has had years to get where he is financially and it will take years for Justin to do the same.  I'm looking forward to Brian's talk with Callen.



Author's Response:

Justin grew up with money so he has not really lived without money (except when he was living with Ethan) so it will take a while for him to get the message.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2018 2:58 am Title: Chapter 46-Whispered Words of Encouragement

I'm rooting for Brian.



Author's Response:

Brian has a sixth sense where Justin is concerned.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2018 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 45- Drama Princess

Looks like Daphne did the right thing.  I just wonder what Brian's planning.



Author's Response:

They make a great team

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2018 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 45- Drama Princess

Justin is on the way to depression and thanks to Daphne, Brian will be able to act on it.



Author's Response:

Daphne and Brian tag team and are very effective

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 44- What Happens In New York Doesn't Stay In New York

Time for Justin to come clean with Carol.  I think she would probably think it funny.



Author's Response:

Justin the drama queen-  trully.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2018 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 44- What Happens In New York Doesn't Stay In New York

Finally: that was painful and Justin is lucky that Brian had mellowed since the Sap incident.

Brian is right, Callen could have some difficulties to explain how he met Justin; he could also remain quiet in the art world, but try to get more from Justin. The worse is maybe not behind yet.



Author's Response:

Callen has reason to stay quiet-  he doesn't want to burn his bridges with the art world, but it shall remain to be seen.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 7:09 am Title: Chapter 18- Brian Kinney Loves Me

Good chapter! And a VERY good question, Justin. Perhaps Lindsay's lying lips should be called into question...yep, even after all these years, I'm still bitter about that one! LOL

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Lindsay was very happy that Brian convinced Justin to go to New York.  She is manipulative and has always been very two faced regarding their relationship.  She tells Brian that he really should tell Justin how he feels but then encourages him to push Justin to go to New York and fulfill ( her dream) of being an artist.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 43- Home Sweet Home

Justin is avoiding again, but Brian is onto him: he won't last long before the truth is out, by him or Daphne.



Author's Response:

Justin can't keep things away from Brian and Brian owns his own "Justin Taylor Operating Manual"

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 43- Home Sweet Home

He'll enjoy things more when he gets things off his chest.  Avoidance only makes things worse.  When will Justin learn that Daphne is always right.



Author's Response:

Justin has had so much happen to him in his short life and every time he thinks he has got it figured out, something new comes along.  He still doesn't want to lose face with Brian and have Brian tell him that he should have come to him for money.  His pride is sometimes his own worst enemy.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 3:43 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh my heart is breaking for both of them yet again. And it's breaking for Jennifer, too. However, and although she has come a very long way since the bashing, I think she's beginning to understand just what Brian was going through with Justin back then.

I tried to do a little writing tonight, but I still keep coming back to this. Usually, I use other stories that I want to read as an incentive to get the current chapter (or series of chapters in the case of BILG) done before I allow myself to read. But the restraint I exude when I'm in my creative bubble is taking a hiatus right now...LOL Onto the next chapter!

 HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Nichelle:

 

I'm flattered by the compliment.  When I reread my stories, I like them and that is the best part of writing long fics.  Jennifer finally does realize that Brian was not just after a piece of 17 year old ass, but really cared for Justin.  It has taken a long time for her to realize and accept that they are truly in love and a committed couple.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 1:14 am Title: Chapter 3- Party Time

OMG!! I understand Justin's need for independence, but now it's cost him his memory. I'm so glad I am reading this again since I've forgotten this part of the story. Angsty times ahead for sure, but hopefully some new and good times too.

HUGS,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

So that answers my question- had you read it before-  yes- another head injury and that isn't good.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 1:01 am Title: Chapter 2- The Photo Shoot

Uh-oh! Looks like Justin is due a spanking...but then again, he might enjoy that! Looks like the night is about to get very interesting.

Off to read the next chapter!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

The story is just beginning-  Justin wants independence and doesn't want to bother Brian.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1- New York - Here I Come

Hey Sandy! Now that "Fatherhood" is getting closer to its end (Dear Darling, I shall MISS that fic!), I figured this was my chance to start reading the series from the beginning. I'm looking forward to exploring this 'Verse from its beginning. 

HUGS,

~Nichelle

P.S. I promise to get back to writing in a little while. Hmm...well, maybe an hour or two LOL



Author's Response:

Nichelle:

 

Yes, Fatherhood is nearing its end-  actually it is finished and waiting for beta approval.  I will be writing in some of my other universes-  ( expanding some one shots into longer stories)-  I never thought Fatherhood would be this long- it was supposed to be a 8-10 chapter fic- what do I know?  lol.  This is a pretty good series and Fatherhood is the latest story in it.  I may continue the series- we shall see.  I have other series-  the Pain Management Series was my first series ( Starts with Falling off the Cliff) and if you have not read this series- I highly recommend it-  They can be found here.  I can't wait for you to update your stories - especially the series where they are on the island-  sorry the name escapes me- but I love it. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2018 1:30 am Title: Chapter 42 The End of The World Or Is It?

An appropriate title.  I hope he has a talk with his agent about giving out personal information.  Daphne will help, but Justin needs to tell Brian too.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 42 The End of The World Or Is It?

Justin is in deep trouble and the more he waits to tell Brian, the more Brian will be mad.



Author's Response:

Justin is still reeling from meeting Tim.  He is still not convinced that his stripping will not end his art career and now he has even more to worry about.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 3:34 am Title: Chapter 41- The Interview

Oh, Dear and things were going so well. 



Author's Response:

WEll I do have to throw some angst in

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2018 3:11 am Title: Chapter 41- The Interview

I don't remember the dancer: is that someone who Justin worked with or is it the stalker or both?



Author's Response:

The man-  Tim Callen saw Justin dancing-  he is a reporter-  He watched him dance several times and asked him out but he declined.  

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2018 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 1- New York - Here I Come

LMAO I keep starting this and then getting lost in life and having to come back to it, but I love this so much. So I downloaded onto my ipad so i can marathon read it and i will review when I am done. Keep writing awesome stories x



Author's Response:

Thanks for downloading and reading off line.  I know that I haven't posted too regularly on this, but I will be trying to post several times a week for the next little while.  Hopefully you will be able to read and enjoy the story. Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying the tale.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2018 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 40- Back to the Old Neighborhood

I'm worried.  Hopefully there is nobody there.



Author's Response:

Wait and see, posting a new chapter today.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2018 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 40- Back to the Old Neighborhood

The suspense is killing me; I'm concerned about the stalker. If Justin is feeling watched, he must be.



Author's Response:

I'm not giving anything away.  Just keep reading ( but you might have to wait until for an answer)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These?

I hope Justin's nightmare is not a premonition too.  How do Ben and Mel feel about their significant others trying to run Brian and Justin's life?



Author's Response:

I think Ben and Mel were very  tired of their spouses behavior. I know I would be. I'm sure they sometimes wonder if they married Brian since he's so much a part of their lives

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 3:48 am Title: Chapter 39- Who Needs Enemies With Friends Like These?

Evil cliffhanger! All that hot stuff and then, bam, the stalker!

The usual best friends' manipulations, but Brian is no more naive.



Author's Response:

Occasionally I am a mean writer and give a cliff hanger.  AS the title says, Who Needs Enemies with friends like these?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2018 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 38- The Truth Hurts

It's nice to know that Brian and Justin are on the same page.



Author's Response:

They are in this together and Brian really supports Justin.

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