Date: Jan 06, 2018 8:24 am Title: Chapter 15-Out of the Mouth of Babes
Great improvement! And the part with Gus is very endearing: I'm sure he will help Justin get some more memories as he doesn't refrain from speaking his mind and they have such a relationship. After all, they were both born is Brian's life on the same day.
Author's Response:
Out of hte mouth of babes really is true. Children just speak their mind and hopefully Gus will be instrumental in helping Justin.
Date: Dec 29, 2017 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 14- Reunion
Good chapter. Little by little, Justin is coming back to his Brian.
Author's Response:
Thanks- It is a slow process; agonizing for both of them.
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2017 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 14- Reunion
Here I thought he remembered enough to have sex. How Brian gets out of this one is beyond me. If only he had that magazine.
Author's Response:
Their bodies remembered; now it is up to Justin's mind and Brian's willingness to tell the truth
Author's Response:
Their bodies remembered; now it is up to Justin's mind and Brian's willingness to tell the truth
Date: Dec 29, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 14- Reunion
Hot hot hot, then cold shower! How will Brian answer that?
Author's Response:
Brian is going to have to think about this one- its the million dollar question
Author's Response:
Brian is going to have to think about this one- its the million dollar question
Author's Response:
Brian is going to have to think about this one- its the million dollar question
Author's Response:
Brian is going to have to think about this one- its the million dollar question
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2017 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 13- Missing My Partner
I would think telling him why he was in NY would be a step in the right direction.
Author's Response:
True. But if Brian told him why he was in New York that might give Justin more frustration about what he doesn't remember. He seems to be remembering more each hour so Brian and he both have to be patient.
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2017 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 12- The Memories Continue
Brian did good.
Author's Response:
He does surprise us sometimes
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2017 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 11-The Truth Hurts
Oh that age old decision. Should I tell him about the six years of bad decisions or not. Brian is not the same and he does love Justin. That is what Justin needs to know.
Author's Response:
Justin needs to know this, but Brian is hoping that he figures out that Brian is there for a reason.
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2017 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
So much to get back and maybe see the past a little differently?
Author's Response:
Brian has the ultimate gift- a redo- now we will have to see if he will take the opporunity to turn his regrets into non - regrets
Date: Dec 23, 2017 7:52 am Title: Chapter 13- Missing My Partner
It's an awful time for Justin, but it's also really hard on Brian as he can't get physical with Justin, which is his favorite pain management; he can't let slip too many clues and can't discuss with him like he did.
The visit to Michael wasn't that bad because it triggered some memories, but also a great pain.
Author's Response:
Yes. It is hurting Brian as much as Justin since he can't show his true support ( ie making love) since he doesn't want to confuse or take advantage of him.
Date: Dec 16, 2017 8:10 am Title: Chapter 12- The Memories Continue
They seem to get better: Brian by finally talking and Justin by seeing the new Brian, more open. Things should be good when Gus will be there.
Not sure about Michael though.
Author's Response:
Sno:
First,I want to thank you for your reveiws. Every writer appreciates knowing folks are reading. I love a Brian who realizes the mistakes he made and is now trying to get them corrected. Mikey is an unknown.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 11-The Truth Hurts
It will be a great opportuity for Brian to come clean and to acknowledge all he did wrong. He already is on the right path, but Justin will need to know what he suspected.
Author's Response:
BRian is torn between wanting to tell Justin what he did wrong and wanting to right past wrongs. Thanks for writing.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
I hope one day Brian will tell Justin he was at the hospital every night. It would be good for them to get this part known.
If Justin thinks there is more to unhide about the prom and the following months, he won't let go.
Author's Response:
Brian doesn't like to talk about hte Prom and has always pushed it under the rug. It should be interesting what he chooses to tell Justin.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 9- Jennifer's Truth
Daphne is up for a big surprise!
Justin is starting to get more memories; maybe it will increase with Daphne.
It's great to see how Jennifer sees Brian now, really for who he is.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 8- The Pink Elephant in the Living Room
Justin wants to know and at the same time he can't stand that Brian, Molly and Jennifer are OK together. With his usual tendency to queen out, there is a risk that this happens again.
Date: Dec 13, 2017 3:52 am Title: Chapter 11-The Truth Hurts
This is such a good story. Seeing Brian realize who and what he is and was is a different plot and hopefully will bring about what Justin needs.
Author's Response:
I enjoyed writing Brian as introspective. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
I kinda wish Brian had denied that he hadn't come to the hospital. At least Justin would know the truth. It's going to be hard because some of the things that happened were preventable.
Author's Response:
It's hard for Brian to admit he was wrong and he has regrets.
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2017 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 9- Jennifer's Truth
Now Daphne is learning that Justin has a memory problem. This is going to be interesting. At least Justin remembers her.
Author's Response:
Justin is remembering slowly.
Date: Dec 05, 2017 3:16 am Title: Chapter 9- Jennifer's Truth
The plot is getting better and better. Hoping for a happy ending. Just love Brian & Justin. Great writing job.
Author's Response:
Thank you. So happy that you are enjoying the story. YOu'll just have to keep reading to find out what's next.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2017 3:24 am Title: Chapter 8- The Pink Elephant in the Living Room
Darn, not knowing things are making Justin's life difficult.
Author's Response:
He's all over the place, emotionally. He always had a special place for Brian but then his parents never approved- and now, Brian is around but he can't remember.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 7- Welcome To Pittsburgh
I can't wait for the next part. Poor Justin just got bombarded with all these memories, aw.
Author's Response:
Justin is dealing iwth a lot, he is trying to remember what he thinks he knows with the reality that he is dealing with right now. A really difficult time indeed.
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 7- Welcome To Pittsburgh
I think he's going to learn exactly how much Brian cares for him.
Author's Response:
Yes- Brian has already decided that this time he will do it right.
Date: Nov 07, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 7- Welcome To Pittsburgh
What an awful period for Justin: at least he remembers some moments that could help him rebuild his memories. Maybe seeing Gus will help too.
Author's Response:
Justin is really struggling. He doesn't know what to think about his relationship with Brian- not even remembering how he wanted their "wahtever" to be more.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 2:40 am Title: Chapter 6- If It's Tuesday, It Must Be New York
*hugs Justin*
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Justin is having a hard time but at least this time Brian is there for him.
Date: Oct 28, 2017 11:43 am Title: Chapter 6- If It's Tuesday, It Must Be New York
Some small events might come back to Justin, but a whole period is gone. It must be pretty scary to have to go thru this.
Author's Response:
It is very scary for him. He doesn't remember Brian and his relationship but he has an inkling that things are different.
Date: Oct 27, 2017 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 6- If It's Tuesday, It Must Be New York
Poor Justin! He must feel so lost. Yet he's still trying to get more info out of Brian...sneaky boy! The last line broke my heart.
Author's Response:
He has memories of some things but not others- It must be terribly confusing to him to not know his past.