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Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2021 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 4- Truth or Consequences

I was so prepared for Justin to not remember Brian, thank fucking g-d.

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Date: Sep 26, 2021 11:51 am Title: Chapter 3- Party Time

Oh shit, he's lost his memory :(

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Date: Sep 26, 2021 11:42 am Title: Chapter 2- The Photo Shoot

OMG! I can't believe it, I knew something would happen but wasn't sure what. Oh man, he's gonna be so mad at Justin. I bet no sexy times tonight :(

Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2021 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1- New York - Here I Come

Oooh, this is a very interesting storyline, I look forward to where this will take us. I don't think Brian is going to like this very much, but I have a feeling Justin is going to do all he can to hide it from his lover.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2019 8:30 am Title: Chapter 20- Living In The Moment

So nice that Brian FINALLY talked to Justin about the cancer - even if it is a bit late. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 2:04 pm Title: Chapter 54- A Wedding and a Show

You picked a fantastic point to end this part of the universe you've made.  Shame that Mikey had to be so Mikey.  Look forward to seeing where the next part in this story goes.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 4:13 am Title: Chapter 15-Out of the Mouth of Babes

I don’t think it would be that big a deal to let Gus talk to Justin about painting... TAG



Author's Response:

It probably wouldn't but for poetic license this works.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2018 4:09 am Title: Chapter 14- Reunion

Well, at least Justin doesn’t need his memories for the sex, right? Lol. TAG



Author's Response:

hahah-  no sex is a muscle memory-  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 53- Planning A Life In New York

A lot of great things are heading their way.



Author's Response:

Absolutely

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 9:32 am Title: Chapter 5

The confusion - it would be horrible... TAG



Author's Response:

TBI's are never a good thing.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 9:06 am Title: Chapter 4- Truth or Consequences

Love that Brian was instantly committed to being there for Justin this time. TAG



Author's Response:

This time he is ready to be there.  He wanted to see Justin and now has to wait to have any connection to him.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 9:00 am Title: Chapter 3- Party Time

Poor Justin’s head - always getting banged around. 🙁 TAG



Author's Response:

Justin is hurt- Brian will not be happy

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 8:52 am Title: Chapter 2- The Photo Shoot

Oops! You’re caught, Sunshine. Lol! TAG



Author's Response:

Yep-  he is falling quickly

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 8:39 am Title: Chapter 1- New York - Here I Come

I know I’ve read this story about 10 times but I can’t resist now that you’re posting it again... lol. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks TAG-  I'm glad it holds up in the rereading.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2018 9:27 am Title: Chapter 53- Planning A Life In New York

Things are definitively looking up for Justin. He can savour his life with Brian and breathe smoothly.



Author's Response:

Yes, Justin can savor his future, one that has been a long time coming

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 52- A Night At Babylon

Brian spoke from his heart.  Love how Ted and Emmett read Brian better than his 'best friend' Mikey.



Author's Response:

Ted and Emmett recognize Brian's growth, whereas Michael still sees him as the Stud of Liberty Avenue

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 52- A Night At Babylon

Beautiful chapter!

For one, the gang knows they are getting married and Michael can whine all he wants, Brian won't follow.

And then, Brian's confession is so moving; he doesn't talk often, but when he does, it's amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I think Brian has really grown in this story.  He is no longer afraid to tell Justin what he thinks

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2018 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 51- Marry Me

Things are looking so good for the boys.  Can't wait to see how the gang takes their announcement.



Author's Response:

I think there will be interesting reactions.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2018 4:35 am Title: Chapter 51- Marry Me

Very positive chapter! I love how they can read each other again. They are ready for their marriage.



Author's Response:

I really enjoyed writing this when Brian just asked Justin because it felt right

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 50- Life Returns to Normal or Does It?

If Lindsey finds out that Brian proposed just after they left due to her remarks, she will be upset. She really doesn't understand Justin and how much he loves Brian nor how Brian actually loves Justin.

Gus is adorable and oblivious of the tension between his mother and the visitors.



Author's Response:

LIndsay has never really understood Brian. If she did, she would have never had Gus, trying to rope him into the "fake" marriage and 2.3 kids with picket fence.  She always wanted Brian, but knew she couldn't have him, or rather a part of her brain accepted it.  But the other part of her brain thought that if she could have his child, then maybe he would change.  She is going to be upset and almost certainly use the reasoning that Justin will be throwing away his career.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2018 3:39 am Title: Chapter 50- Life Returns to Normal or Does It?

Now that was a nice ending. 



Author's Response:

Thanks=  but the story isn't over yet.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 49- In New York, We Go Shopping

Brian and his sofa! I love how Justin was trying all the couches and in the end the "fuck test": these guys know what is important!



Author's Response:

This scenes is one of my favorites-  I don't write humor well, but this had me laughing the whole time I wrote it

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 2:38 pm Title: Chapter 49- In New York, We Go Shopping

The trip to NY turned out fine.  Who would have thought picking out sofas would prove so infigerating.



Author's Response:

One of my favorite scenes- picking out the sofa- or rather the fucking simulation

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 48- The Critic

Both meetings went well: Brian got what he wanted without giving too much info.

Justin got to explain what happened during the prom and gave more reasons to be proud of what he became and had overcome.

I love caveman Brian!



Author's Response:

I think that Brian is super protective of Justin right now.  He is still recovering from the accident and wants him to move forward with his life.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 48- The Critic

I'm still wondering why Callen was interested in Justin before he knew he was an artist.  Love the chapter.  Is Justin still convinced he can't paint?



Author's Response:

Callen saw him dancing and liked what he saw- he was seeing him as a man not in a professional capacity.  Justin is working on his belief that he can paint.

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