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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was so confused, but that was a good story and reason behind it!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was so confused, but that was a good story and reason behind it!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well done! A very fun story.

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent!!

I don't know the story in detail, but I remember some parts of the film with Johnny Depp.

It reminds me of Hunter calling Justin "blondie".



Author's Response:

Thank you. Finally enough Hunter was gonna be my Dormouse but after moving Mel to the March Hare i couldn't help myself with JR.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! That was sweet. At first I didn't know what the hell was going on lol cute story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I was worried after I uploaded it that people would hate it. I'm glad I was wrong. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow that is some fairy tale.  A good one too.



Author's Response:

Thank you, again. LOL 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 2:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Funny and sweet. Great job.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you . 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg...brilliant...the ending was unexpected but very good one...i loved it...thank u.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and i was able to surprise you. 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2017 9:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Very strange. I wasn't sure where it was going , but good ending.



Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry it was strange for the most part. I wanted the ending to be a surprise so most everyone had to take a leap and read it. Thank you for leaping. 

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