Date: Jun 05, 2021 5:11 am Title: Chapter 14
I think that Justin really needs to be more aware of his relationship with both Bree and Brian. His art is a great thing, but he has a very bad habit of putting it ahead of them.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 9:36 am Title: Chapter 14
The toy car for Gus really was cruel. But I love it. Great ending to this part of your story.
Author's Response: Thanks very much.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 9:07 am Title: Chapter 13
I just hope that stupid ass reporter won't cause any problems.
Author's Response: Let's hope not.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 8:49 am Title: Chapter 12
I don't think Craig will ever come around but at least they can be in the same room now.
Author's Response: I suppose that's a step forward.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 8:39 am Title: Chapter 11
It's so cute to see Justin so nervous.
Author's Response: Justin has a tendency to do that.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 8:28 am Title: Chapter 10
I hope Aaron can perform a little miracle.
Author's Response: He probably can.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 8:08 am Title: Chapter 9
I think it's perfectly fine for Michael to be reluctant about the twins. When he gets proof of their good work he'll be a big fan.
Author's Response: Let's hope so.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 7:57 am Title: Chapter 8
I really like the thought of celebrating all these events together.
Gus will be disappointed that he doesn't get a car but it's the right thing to do.
Author's Response: Glad you agree.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 7:44 am Title: Chapter 7
The video sounds absolutely amazing. Whatever Brian's plan is I hope it works.
Its so great that Curtis officially has new parents. He deserves it.
Author's Response: It would be interesting to actually see such a video.
Date: Mar 23, 2018 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
Thank god here you are not allowed to drive without a certified driving instructor before you have your license. I'd have a heart attack.
Author's Response: I think Brian is having one too.
Date: Mar 23, 2018 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh Bree. They really need to have a talk with her. This can't be good for a little girl.
Author's Response: Like any child she doesn't want her family to break apart.
Date: Mar 23, 2018 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad that Justin and Brian are going on a date. Justin should be careful, this is threatening to tear his whole family apart.
Author's Response: Hopefully the date will help.
Date: Mar 23, 2018 8:53 am Title: Chapter 3
At least Justin is aware of the problem. Jennifer is a good mom. She knows her kids aren't perfect.
Author's Response: No one's perfect, but Justin needs to do better.
Date: Mar 23, 2018 8:44 am Title: Chapter 2
It's great to see Curtis so happy.
Justin forgot the kids? This is bad. Really bad. No matter how much he loves his art he has to make time for his family. They are way more important.
Author's Response: That's the problem - the pull between art and family.
Date: Mar 22, 2018 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bree. It must be bad if even the kids realize that something is really wrong.
Author's Response: Very bad indeed.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 14
Loved this story and couldn't stop reading it. The party is fantastic and Brian did the best job of incorporating everyone. Why do I feel like the weazle of an art critic is going to be trouble?
Author's Response: Thanks for that lovely comment.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 3:21 am Title: Chapter 13
Brian and the art critic. What a hoot. Now the real show starts.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed that.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 3:10 am Title: Chapter 12
Bree told Craig. Craig is going to have to get along with Brian if he wants to stay in Bree's life. Curtis, Gus and JR are getting along great. I can't wait for closing night.
Author's Response: Craig will always be a pain in the you know what.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 3:00 am Title: Chapter 11
Hehe! Bobby's idea of Brian calming Justin down sounds right on. Shame they did do it. Looks like Curtis' party will have Bree and Patrick there when the time comes. Now back to Justin's show.
Author's Response: The extended family sticks together.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 10
The opening night and Bree wants new clothes! Then the wiring burns out. It's a good thing I know Aaron is good.
Author's Response: Bree is a fashionista.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 2:38 am Title: Chapter 9
Loved Gus and Brian at the computer store. Now Justin and the twins could do the cartoon for Rage without Michael who is a wet blanket. Lacy would be a good fit. Just hope that Justin doesn't get so embroiled in this like he did with the fractal project.
Author's Response: That's always a danger.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 2:26 am Title: Chapter 8
I like Brian's plan. It will work out well. I have a feeling that Justin's fractals will work out good too.
Author's Response: You know us - happy endings. LOL
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 2:18 am Title: Chapter 7
Melanie is in her world as she helps Curtis, Hector and Ralph become a family. Curtis is the one who turned things around. Now as for Justin and his twins- I have a feeling that Brian and their fairy godmother will make things just right.
Author's Response: Melanie is happiest with her work.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 2:07 am Title: Chapter 6
Well I know Hector and Ralph do become parents. So all's good there. Gus and driving though. That's a tough one.
Author's Response: Teenage drivers are always tricky.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2017 1:53 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm loving Justin's twins. Perfect names and coloring. Poor Bree, feeling unwanted. But once Brian and Justin get home with Gus all that will change.
Author's Response: Changes are coming.