[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 3:10 am Title: Chapter 8
Spies are everywhere. Carl at the diner, Joan at the bookstore, and Hunter in the alley. I don't see Cole getting away with shit. It's good that Ted is getting a well deserved vacation.
Author's Response: Gus has great people trying to help him.
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2017 2:40 am Title: Chapter 7
Brian may be brave but when he finds out he's been burgled, he's gonna be pissed.
Author's Response: You got that right.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
How nice that Patrick kept a special place for Bree to write on his cast. I like it when a plan comes together. Now we know what the next story is going to be about. Sound good, and I can't help but wonder how you came up with the idea. Gus is asking for trouble and that happy smile he's got now won't last long.
Author's Response: Patrick and Bree have a very special relationship.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Nice chapter and we got it twice over. lol. So much goodness from Gus almost telling Lindsay, to Claire telling John to back off. Loved Teddy growing some balls. Patrick will be fine because Bree won't have it any other way.
Author's Response: LOL Good summary.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
At least Bree is taking responsibility because what she said was correct. If she hadn't been auguing with Patrick he probably wouldn't have tried to show off. One thing I'm sure of is that Bree will get her chance to help Patrick. Gus really needs to come clean before things get to far out of hand.
Author's Response: The children are in big doodoo.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Children will be children, whether they are five or sixteen. I'm pleased the JR didn't weigh in causing more troubles. She's one of the many nice characters in spite of her mom.
Author's Response: JR seems to have gotten the best from each of her parents.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Looks like Gus is in the doghouse.
Author's Response: Yes he is.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2017 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Don't remember exactly how Brian found out about the pilfering, but there were enough people who saw Gus with Cole that had planned on mentioning it. On the bright side Curtis actually made a request and wasn't shot down like he expected. Things in his life will be a positive experience from now on.
Author's Response: About time that Cole gets drawn up short.
Date: May 20, 2017 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
I'm sad to see another installment end. But I know there's another one in the way. Love this series.
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Date: May 20, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
Gus is smitten! I'm so happy Ray has shown up.
Author's Response: Better things to come, no pun intended lol
Date: May 20, 2017 11:52 am Title: Chapter 13
Yeah!!! They are finally going to jail.
Ray is was better for Gus. The summer can be salvaged.
Author's Response: Ray and Gus are a good pair.
Date: May 20, 2017 11:43 am Title: Chapter 12
I hope nothing happens to Gus. I'm getting very worried.
Bree is so damn cute. I love her and Patrick together.
Author's Response: Bree and Patrick are a cute couple. LOL
Date: May 20, 2017 11:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Well they have a game plan. I hope it all works out.
Author's Response: We'll see.
Date: May 20, 2017 10:53 am Title: Chapter 10
Well I understand why they want to keep it from Brian. Not sure how successful they'll be. I knew Gus was going to get his heart broken. I just want to hug him.
Author's Response: Brian would be hard to control when he finds out.
Date: May 20, 2017 10:45 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Curtis faced his fear and has started swimming lessons. Ralph and Hector are right, he needs to understand they are never going to get rid of him. They love him.
Kinda shocked that Gus picked Lindsay to spill his guts to.
I hope Hunter alerts Brian to Cole and Lex's thievery.
Author's Response: Curtis has found his he, and the Lane family takes care of their own.
Date: May 20, 2017 7:58 am Title: Chapter 8
I think Brian and Ted gave Cynthia quite the scare. :) Ted does deserve a break.
Cole better watch out. Carl and Hunter are getting suspicious.
Author's Response: Thanks, I think Cole's run is starting to end.
Date: May 20, 2017 7:48 am Title: Chapter 7
I really hate Cole!
Brian and the kids were so adorable. Leave it to them to torment him with another frog.
Author's Response: You're meant to hate Cole, so it's good that you do. LOL
Date: May 14, 2017 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 15
So glad everyone is doing so well...
Can't wait for the next installment!!!! I always want the next one as soon as I finish the current one... I'm addicted! lol
Author's Response: We love that you are addicted.
Date: May 14, 2017 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
So glad both Kinney boys went to court to watch Cole and show Cole they are better without him!
and Gus is SOOOO much better with Ray around!
Author's Response: Definitely.
Date: May 14, 2017 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad everyone is trying to help Gus not feel as guilty, but he should feel a bit guilty... he fell for it, but he needs to move on from it quickly... Once he talks to Brian, he will hopefully be able to start moving on... and Raymond visiting might just do the trick lol
Author's Response: Gus has some guilt in the matter, but it's hard when you're young and inexperienced.
Date: May 14, 2017 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 12
I can see Brian's reactions coming for when he finds out what's been going on...
Anger, Relief, but first I bet he just hugs Gus being thankful he wasn't hurt in it all.
Author's Response: This is a parent' worst nightmare for his child.
Date: May 14, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 11
Brian at the cottage is such a different, so much more relaxed in his own world, person... love the family man Brian.
Author's Response: Us too.
Date: May 14, 2017 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
Is Melanie just bitchy with any male Kinney??? she was way too harsh speaking to Gus... so glad Gus didn't lose his virginity to that asshat.
Author's Response: We'd never let that happen.
Date: May 14, 2017 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Damn, Hunter is the key to fixing this!!!!
Author's Response: Could be.
Date: May 14, 2017 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh I REALLY hope Hunter heard all or at least enough of that to get the "get rid of Cole" ball rolling!
Author's Response: I think everyone who knows Gus is hoping for that.