[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2023 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
I’ve read this several times, but it never occurred to me….where’s JR? Does she not exist?
Author's Response:
Hiya, nope no JR in this one, there wasn't a way to have her in the story that worked.
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 08, 2019 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
just loved it. Never liked Debbie and I do not feel sorry for Lindsey or Michael
Date: Feb 16, 2018 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
I have to admit that this is the third time that I have read this story. I've never been good at leaving feedback, which is unfair to you as a writer because I really enjoy what you do. I never cared for Deb, Lindsey or Michael and this story certainly gave me what I wanted. I'm sure that I will revisit this story again because it is that good.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Peggy.
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 15, 2017 9:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Brandon was definitely a surprise, a good one tho. It makes me so happy that he's able to look through Michael's bullshit. You're the first person who interpreted Brandon's thoughts on the whole bet as I did. I always had the feeling he wanted to find out just how good Brian really is but everyone I talked to about it, told me nope. It's good to see at least one other person who thought the same. I also like Eden a lot. She seems very passionated about her job and this case.
Debbie is... Debbie. Always had mixed feelings about her. She did a lot of good things for the community and the boys but she also treated them unfair and especially Brian badly for no reason other than her inability to see Michael as a grown up man and not as just her perfect, innocent baby.
Justin wanting to face Michael and Lindsay just shows how strong he is. Wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the rest.
Date: Aug 14, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brian and Justin were the reason I started watching QaF and became a fan. I love how free and open Brian is in this chapter. Saying that Justin is perfect to him is simply beautiful. And this is a Mel I would have loved to see on the show.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Me too, Mel was written too shrewish for my liking!
Hope you continue to read.
MissMerlot
Date: Jul 02, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for writing this PB for me! Great job. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you for the PB, even though towards the end it was difficult to write I'm glad I did it. So start cooking the next one for me please!
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2017 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
These sessions with the doctors could get intense... TAG
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2017 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting way to add in Brandon to this story. TAG
Date: Jul 02, 2017 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just an excellent start - builds the suspense and immediately drags the reader in. Great job! TAG
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 11
Is it sad that I think Deb or Lindsay could have done this too, they all are so conniving that with the fabulous way you told the story I can see anyone of the three babies doing this and gloating about it just the way Michael did.
It's sad how they all feel entitled and no one wants to accept the part they played that lead to this happening in the first place<smh>
Date: Jun 09, 2017 1:48 pm Title: Chapter 11
I loved this. You went about telling this story in a totally different way. It was really intriguing and I couldn't really stop reading. Great work.
Date: Jun 09, 2017 4:50 am Title: Chapter 10
Michael is even more fucked up than I thought and I didn't think that was even possible.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
How can she not see that she is hurting so many people with her behavior?
Date: Jun 08, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
It all comes out. About time.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow. That was intense. I hope Brian and Justin will come out of this okay.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
I was really hoping for Deb to come around. But she is almost as guilty as Michael. She must have known at least partly what was going on.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait for the answer to that.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's really interesting to see their relationship through other people's eyes. Can't wait to see how that develops.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
I hope they can prove that Michael is completely sane.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Justin is very brave. I don't know if I would be able to face them.
Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning. Will we get to know what happened at the loft?
Author's Response:
Oh yes. I hope you continue to enjoy reading it. It was hard to write towards the end but I'm glad I did it.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2017 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
This whole story was amazing. I cried through most of it, except for the times I wanted to take a shovel to several people's faces. The portrayals were very realistic. As usual, a great story from your amazing brain.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
A bit late, for which I sincerely apologise, but thanks for that. From a writer of your calibre...thank you.
MissMerlot
Date: May 24, 2017 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful story!!!
Deb finally got what she deserved for always protecting her son: she was alone and banned from her avenue.
Jennifer and Daphne are like lionesses with cubs, like Deb, but it doesn't feel the same at all.
Michael was so Machiavellian, yet, still stupid enough to not think about the video taping... Too bad, or not!
At least, Justin is Gus' father and he has his memories back.
Date: May 24, 2017 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow I waited to read this till it was done And am glad because it was greatand I did not want to stop reading it. Thank you again for sharing another gr tory with us.