[Report This]Date: May 24, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Fabulous fic and ending.
Thanks so much for sharing your extrodanary talent.
JoAnn
Date: May 23, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful story, thanks for writing. Sad to see this ending.
* hugs *
Date: May 23, 2017 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm finding it hard to put this one into words. I have to word this carefully. I don't want any misunderstanding.
This was, propbably your most difficult story to read. And I mean that in a good way! It was so incredibly emotionally...I guess draining? It's one of those stories, that I wastotally hooked on. I couldn't wait for the next update. I was practically salivating, and would look several times a day for a new chapter. It fed my need me in a way.
At the same time, while I anticiapted every chapter, I was almost relieved for it to end. Again...do not misunderstand!! the anxiety, and fury, anger, the entire emotional upheaval I experienced reading this was a bit exhausting. I can't even imagine how it was for you to write it!! My goodness! Such Kudos to you for writing this! I would imagine after each chapter, you'd need to recharge or something.
I now can go and re-read this and just enjoy it now. I'll have much less of an emotional reaction as I know what to expect! I can just shout at my kindle and call them names. lol. It a great one to read when I want to vent. (which happens a lot actually lol)
I hope you take my words in the context they are meant.
I'm glad everyone got their cummupence! It was just too little too late for Deb. There's no real way to make amends after all she did and said. Michael, well......and Lindsey too. I think chalk it up to Karma. You reap what you sow.
AS for the gang...YAY!! Glad Mel stayed. Very happy endings for the family.
What an excellent read. You....my goodness. what a gem you are.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine, I completely agree with you. It was so difficult to write and after C10 I had to end it as I was starting to dread writing it. I'm glad you liked it though. Thanks
Nicole
Date: May 23, 2017 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hiya.
I'm a bit lost for words to describe what this story did for me. But believe me it absolutely rocked.
Rest in unholy peace Michael Novotny. You and your mother got what you deserved.
And allthough I didn't care much for Lindsay, I do feel sorry for her.
Thank you for this deeply moving story.
Hugs
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
Hey lovely,
I'm glad you liked it. It was very hard to write towards the end. I did feel sorry for Lindsay because he truly wanted them both gone from Brian's life.
Double hugs with chocolate and fudge
Nicole xxxx
Date: May 23, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 11
A very sad story, but beautiful at the end. I love it!
Date: May 23, 2017 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi There is this sequel
Author's Response:
This is a standalone story. There's no way there could be a sequel as the main protagonists are gone. I hope you enjoy what there is.
MissMerlot
Date: May 23, 2017 8:30 am Title: Chapter 11
Loved this story. Thank you so much for sharing!
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2017 6:32 am Title: Chapter 11
A fabulous story and in the end everyone hot what they deserved.ooming forward to reading another one of your stories.
Date: May 23, 2017 4:17 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow!! It was short and yet it achieved its goal by showing how calculating and selfish Michael, Lindsay and Deb could be to get what they want.
They didn't love their family they just enjoyed the power they had over them and how they wielded it to get what they want.
Brian, Justin, Gus and their new baby will live their lives happy surrounded by their real family and if anyone thinks of or mentions Michael, Lindsay and Deb it will be to say "We're Better Off Without Them"
Michael really thought he would get off by blaming Lindsay too bad he never learned the fine art of listening.
Deb actually thought after her blame game she could just resume her place as Brian's de facto mother like her son she never learned the fine art of listening and her words, actions were thrown back at her by Liberty Avenue.
The worse thing to happen to Deb is that she is all alone and no one cares, it's the same thing Michael and Lindsay were afraid of too.
Fantastic Story, Will be reading it again :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I have to admit that I started to find it a bit hard to write. I think it was the anti-Debbie aspect of it, but it's done. I'm pleased with it.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2017 3:40 am Title: Chapter 11
Another fantastic story comes to an end and we get the ending we all hoped for.
Date: May 22, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
The scene between Brian and Justin was epic: fun, hot, tender, so unexpected for Brian and so loud!!!
The comments they received from Jennifer, Emmett and the others were hilarious, especially Jennifer about the soundproofing... and as usual, Justin ashamed and red, and Brian mischievous.
The end was surprising with the death and the way Michael is considering his mother. I hope she will understand her huge mistake before it's too late for her.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love how you write your stories, they pull in to want more and more with each chapter.
Can't wait for more of this and your other stories.
Date: May 20, 2017 12:22 am Title: Chapter 10
I'm so glad that Justin and Brian got to reconnect in the morning. They really needed that time together.
Love how Jennifer was with Ben.
Well Lindsay's dead so now Michael can be charged with murder.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 12:10 am Title: Chapter 10
Wow 8xs and 9 1/2 How was Justin not in traction and not surprising Brian is The King!?!?! ;)
Deb is basically grasping at straws to keep up the Brian Is To Blame For Everything and Michael Is An Angel.
Not surprised she actually thought she was coming to Britin nice to see her get knocked down another peg, and she used the whole 'You know Michael didn't mean to say that' maybe Deb should get that on a t-shirt.
For every small thing Michael did it was insignificant to the bigger stuff Justin did to save Brian, just because Michael tossed a pebble in the ocean doesn't mean he created the perfect wave Deb<eye roll>
Now that Lindsay is dead Michael will be charged with Murder...Now Who's To Blame Deb??
Glad everyone knows about what was said at the party that got Michael a punch in the mouth.
Getting a glimpse into the depraved mind of Michael was scary because the extent of Michael's selfishness knows no bounds, he wanted to try kill Justin again and that he wanted Lindsay dead too, and he wanted Deb to devote everything to him and to Hell with everyone else.
No Father Figure, What The Hell Was Vic???
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
Has Coin seen the look on Michael's face. I'm sure that he was an open book with his thoughts. Now he'll get convicted of Murder one, since they have proof that he swung the bottle that knocked her out.
Date: May 19, 2017 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
Interactions between B&J were fabulous. a few times a little worrisome, but it appears justin was playing him a bit. I enjoyed it. A much needed light hearted scene.
Laughed at the kitchen chats. A mind boggling EIGHT times! hehe. Describing Michael's BJ attempts. Much like Jenn, I'll never look at corn on the cob the same way again. I'll start having giggle fits in the grocery store. It was bad enough before with just zucchini, now there's corn! LOL
WOW! Lindsey is dead?!?!? (is she really or are they just trying to entrap Michael?) I always have to question these things. Your mind is a wonderland of ideas, twists and turns. ;). If she is, I'm assuming Michael will be charged.
Deb is soon going to run out of excuses for her son. she already sounds ridiculous and foolish.
Michael's exclamation of never having a positive role model before..What the hell was vic you f-cker! Grrrrrrr.
Holy shitballs batman! Michael is absolutely, positively certifiable! His inner diatribe was scary as shit! He's nuts! And that last part, about his mom. that he should be the only one that mattered...I seriously got chills up my spine! All I could think of was Norman Bates!
WOW! Every single chapter is intense. Thrilling! Emotional...not enough words to describe. I am completely enthralled. Sucked into this story! Once update is posted and I'm salivating for teh next one. :)
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
What a selfish, narcissistic ass (oh wait, I'm channeling my view of our president again) but fitting. They both have the same maturity.
Will he now get charged for Lindsey's death?
Deb found out more truths about her baby boy and we can hope she wakes up soon, but I'm not holding my breathe.
Date: May 18, 2017 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow! That was quite a session. I love how Lindsay keeps getting shut down. lol
I'm starting to hate Debs more than Michael and that's a very hard thing to accomplish. I can't believe she would think that Brian infected Ben. How exactly when he is HIV negative?
She's such a bitch. Can't wait for more.
Hugs,
Jessica
P.S. As for the migraine issue, I've suffered from chronic migraines since I was 10 years old. IT'S NOT JUST A HEADACHE!!!!
Date: May 18, 2017 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Again, Deb is being a complete asshole...I can't even
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow!! Deb heard Ben and Brian had sex four years before he met Michael and she accuses Brian of giving Ben Aids! What A Total Bitch!!!!!!!!!!
I kinda sorta wish that Daphne and Jennifer had got to Deb she would have gotten a beat down that would have been very unWasp like.
Why is Deb covering for Michael?
Why would she especially after hearing that if she lost her home Michael would let her live in the gutter than in his home<smh> What A Son!
Michael took pleasure in the reaction everyone had to his mother accusing Brian(What A Disgusting Worm!!)
I can't believe Brian gave Michael twenty thousand and he spent it on a vacation and more stupid toys!!!
Lindsay has now realized that Michael really set out to kill her and pin everything on her.
And Emmett made a good point no way would Michael throw away a chance to whine to Brian about Ben leaving him, Michael planned all of this just like he is planning his Diminished Capacity act to get out of jail.
The next session should be interesting maybe Lindsay will get to hear how her actions lead to this too?
Date: May 18, 2017 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
Sooooo, am curious now. That last part, where Deb mentioned that "she had her reasons" for lying about the money and not calling Michael out on it. What is she up to? There's something deeper there. something she's hiding I think or is she just so completely blind to Michael? Excusing anything and everything because he's her son.
Hunter is the BOMB DIGGETY! Such respect. He, while completely unnecssary, wants to pay Brian back. Brian recognizes that Hunter needs to do this and accepts teh offer. Not because he needs it, but because hunter needs this. No doubt he'll put into some account for Hunter down the road, but either way, Hunter is manning up. I foresee Ben doing the same thing.
Daphne is a little cheek isn't she?? That was great. Had to laugh. Deb's reaction was disgusting, but Michael's future reaction I'm sure is going to be priceless.
I gather next chapter is going to be a rough one as well? Am lovign every second of this emotional roller coaster! Absolutely brilliant.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 18, 2017 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Whoa! Once again, very heavy material! Deb is SO stupid: Brian infected Ben while he is negative... Sure, she didn't know the timeline, but come on, for a PFLAG member, she should know the basics!
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2017 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
We are learning more and more about what Michael did or did not do. And Debbie has joined Mikey in the delusional train. On finding out that Brian and Ben fucked she jumps to the conclusion that Brian is HIV positive? Amazing.
Date: May 18, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 8
I really hate Deb in this one...I can't believe she is acting like this
Author's Response:
You're not going to like her in the next chapter...but I am going to ease up on her for a bit. Michael forgets that he's being evaluated and starts to show his true self...
Hope you continue to read.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Owww! I lived how things are coming out about Deb's hand in things. Keep the chapters coming. Love your stories.